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Will You Let Me In

Whispers at dawn I awaken near your yawn Will you let me into your heart? Dreams of passion I need your compassion This will be our sensuous start Falling in love all we need is a shove Will you let me into your arms? Breakfast for two your love I will chew I’m drowning in your lucky charms Side by side our love will preside Will you let me into your essence? Through forever always together Within warming skies of iridescence In circles of infinity we are divinity Will you let me into your soul? Through timeless space I will embrace Our love sailing in a black hole. Aug.16.2017 Let Me Into Your Heart Sponsored by: Julie Rodeheaver

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Teddy Kimathi

Date: 8/29/2017 8:19:00 AM

Congrats WW, for your well-deserved third placement with this awesome piece!! ;-)

Susan Ashley

Date: 8/23/2017 6:02:00 PM

WW, what a beautifully written sensual and romantic poem. So enjoyed this. Congratulations on your win! :)

Winged Warrior
Date: 8/24/2017 10:57:00 AM

Thank you so much Susan...god bless...^WW^

Charlie Smith

Date: 8/22/2017 1:06:00 PM

Congratulations WW, well deserved...

Winged Warrior
Date: 8/24/2017 10:55:00 AM

Thank you Charlie...always nice when you drop in my friend...god bless...^WW^

John Hamilton

Date: 8/22/2017 11:28:00 AM

Wonderful write, of course I loved the internal rhyme, congrats on another fine win!

Winged Warrior
Date: 8/24/2017 10:54:00 AM

Thank you John...you led me to that format...it's all your fault lol...god bless...^WW^

Heidi Sands

Date: 8/21/2017 6:50:00 AM

Congratulations for your win WW!! Yay!

Winged Warrior
Date: 8/21/2017 7:16:00 AM

Thank you so much Heidi...god bless...^WW^

Vijay Pandit

Date: 8/21/2017 6:27:00 AM

Congrats WW on your big win!

Winged Warrior
Date: 8/21/2017 7:16:00 AM

Thank you, Vijay...god bless...^WW^

Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 8/21/2017 4:37:00 AM

Lovely poem, W2, and fascinating and beautiful phrasing ... gets the wheels turning - congrats on your win!

Winged Warrior
Date: 8/21/2017 7:15:00 AM

Thank you so much Greg...god bless...^WW^

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/19/2017 8:41:00 PM

WW, this is a WOW poem on this theme. A sure winner I think!!!

Winged Warrior
Date: 8/21/2017 7:14:00 AM

Thank you so much, Andrea...god bless...^WW^

Maria Williams

Date: 8/18/2017 4:31:00 AM

Wonderful WW, so sensual and romantic. I love it......Maria

Winged Warrior
Date: 8/21/2017 7:13:00 AM

Thank you so much Maria...god bless...^WW^

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/17/2017 3:58:00 PM

Quite lovely!

Winged Warrior
Date: 8/21/2017 7:12:00 AM

Thank you so much Kim...god bless...^WW^

Russell Sivey

Date: 8/17/2017 3:53:00 AM

Wowsers! This is a very awesome write here WW! You portrayed the relationship between two individuals very positively and tremendously! Your rhyme, I can't get over how wonderful this rhyming scheme is, perfect! I could only dream to write so well with rhyme! Awesome Work!!

Winged Warrior
Date: 8/21/2017 7:12:00 AM

Thank you, dear friend...god bless...^WW^