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Will You Let Me In

Whispers at dawn I awaken near your yawn
Will you let me into your heart?
Dreams of passion I need your compassion
This will be our sensuous start

Falling in love all we need is a shove
Will you let me into your arms?
Breakfast for two your love I will chew
I’m drowning in your lucky charms

Side by side our love will preside
Will you let me into your essence?
Through forever always together
Within warming skies of iridescence

In circles of infinity we are divinity
Will you let me into your soul?
Through timeless space I will embrace
Our love sailing in a black hole.




Aug.16.2017
Let Me Into Your Heart
Sponsored by: Julie Rodeheaver 

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Teddy Kimathi Date: 8/29/2017 8:19:00 AM Congrats WW, for your well-deserved third placement with this awesome piece!! ;-) Login to Reply

Susan Ashley Date: 8/23/2017 6:02:00 PM WW, what a beautifully written sensual and romantic poem. So enjoyed this. Congratulations on your win! :) Login to Reply Winged Warrior Date: 8/24/2017 10:57:00 AM Thank you so much Susan...god bless...^WW^

Charlie Smith Date: 8/22/2017 1:06:00 PM Congratulations WW, well deserved... Login to Reply Winged Warrior Date: 8/24/2017 10:55:00 AM Thank you Charlie...always nice when you drop in my friend...god bless...^WW^

John Hamilton Date: 8/22/2017 11:28:00 AM Wonderful write, of course I loved the internal rhyme, congrats on another fine win! Login to Reply Winged Warrior Date: 8/24/2017 10:54:00 AM Thank you John...you led me to that format...it's all your fault lol...god bless...^WW^

Heidi Sands Date: 8/21/2017 6:50:00 AM Congratulations for your win WW!! Yay! Login to Reply Winged Warrior Date: 8/21/2017 7:16:00 AM Thank you so much Heidi...god bless...^WW^

Vijay Pandit Date: 8/21/2017 6:27:00 AM Congrats WW on your big win! Login to Reply Winged Warrior Date: 8/21/2017 7:16:00 AM Thank you, Vijay...god bless...^WW^

Gregory Richard Barden Date: 8/21/2017 4:37:00 AM Lovely poem, W2, and fascinating and beautiful phrasing ... gets the wheels turning - congrats on your win! Login to Reply Winged Warrior Date: 8/21/2017 7:15:00 AM Thank you so much Greg...god bless...^WW^

Andrea Dietrich Date: 8/19/2017 8:41:00 PM WW, this is a WOW poem on this theme. A sure winner I think!!! Login to Reply Winged Warrior Date: 8/21/2017 7:14:00 AM Thank you so much, Andrea...god bless...^WW^

Maria Williams Date: 8/18/2017 4:31:00 AM Wonderful WW, so sensual and romantic. I love it......Maria Login to Reply Winged Warrior Date: 8/21/2017 7:13:00 AM Thank you so much Maria...god bless...^WW^

Kim Rodrigues Date: 8/17/2017 3:58:00 PM Quite lovely! Login to Reply Winged Warrior Date: 8/21/2017 7:12:00 AM Thank you so much Kim...god bless...^WW^

Russell Sivey Date: 8/17/2017 3:53:00 AM Wowsers! This is a very awesome write here WW! You portrayed the relationship between two individuals very positively and tremendously! Your rhyme, I can't get over how wonderful this rhyming scheme is, perfect! I could only dream to write so well with rhyme! Awesome Work!! Login to Reply Winged Warrior Date: 8/21/2017 7:12:00 AM Thank you, dear friend...god bless...^WW^

Ronald A. Williams Date: 8/16/2017 9:21:00 PM Very pronounced with well put word pictures. I lied the poem. Nevertheless love begins and ends with Jesus. Amen Login to Reply Winged Warrior Date: 8/21/2017 7:11:00 AM Thank you so much, Ronald...god bless...^WW^

Arturo Michael Date: 8/16/2017 12:43:00 PM Romantic..." Will you let me into your essence" That's deep...Good luck on a lovely write... Login to Reply Winged Warrior Date: 8/21/2017 7:09:00 AM Thank you, Arturo...god bless...^WW^

Heidi Sands Date: 8/16/2017 10:50:00 AM Oh this is very touching WW. So well written for the contest. Good luck with your entry :) Login to Reply Winged Warrior Date: 8/21/2017 7:09:00 AM Thank you, Heidi...god bless...^WW^