Will You

Your chapter was over but I kept on reading As if I knew you were my only ending If I let myself fall again and again Will you hold me let me drown in the pain?

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Beata Agustin

Date: 7/20/2024 4:48:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Mahtab Bangalee

Date: 7/17/2020 2:51:00 AM

superb stanza...........nice to read

Serenity Gordon Odai

Date: 6/15/2020 9:48:00 AM

"Gored my heart and my blood chilled"(To Death I Spoke by Angel L Villanueva) in other words I too feel like this.