Will She Draw Him To Her Light

She wanders in darkest Night
Bathed in incandescent Light
Her pathway is all aglow
His dwelling lies in Shadow

A gentle rustling he hears
He is consumed by his fears
Beyond, he sees dazzling Light
This lone dweller of the Night

As he peers betwixt the trees
He knows not that she sees
She undresses there with grace
Her beauty lights up his face

Is this moment but a dream?
True to life her presence seems
The Shadows slowly recede
He is consumed by his need

As she turns, she “sees” him there
Eyes peek through her jet black hair
“Come to me,” is in her smile
Yet he lingers for a while

Her love will not be detained
Luscious lips are cherry stained
Hazel eyes are all aflame
He hears her call out his name

Her voice is a tender stream
Much sweeter than any dream
Her curves fill him with delight
He drinks in the wondrous sight

She beckons him with her hand
A goddess on earthen stand
Oh, how his soul longs for Light
But all he knows is the Night

Her steps are a dulcet chime
He is seeing the sublime
Transfixed, yet he crouches low
His shame she must never know

Her breasts level with his face
She draws his hands up to trace
His poor heart begins to pound
In that place, no other sound

She stoops low for him to taste
His hands wrap around her waist
He caresses silken skin
Flowing hair curtains him in

She murmurs sounds, oh, so sweet
As his mouth takes in each treat
He cannot reign in his greed
As her breasts his hunger feed

She lets out contented sigh
His hand moves down to her thigh
Then he lowers her to him
In her liquid depth to swim

Darkness hovers over Light
He savors her with delight
She submits to his strong will
Thus his empty heart to fill

Her whispered moans drive him on
Acquiescence he has won
As he thrusts into her frame
From her lips burst out his name

He feels her essence pulsate
For waves of light emanate
Their release, the tension breaks
They lie still in passion’s wake

On her breast he falls asleep
He does not know that she weeps
When he wakes she will be gone
For to Light she does belong

Debbie G's Song Cont.
9/11/03

I chose the Leaving on a Jet Plane because it speaks of love not being enough to stop the longing in someone's heart to travel. Here, though LIGHT wants to draw Darkness into her world, she knows that Light and Darkness cannot coexist as they are from different worlds. Light might come back to him again, just as the singer promises to return to his love on a permanent basis ("wedding ring"), but we are left to wonder.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 10/13/2013 9:28:00 PM
well done...........SKAT
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Date: 10/11/2013 12:46:00 PM
Eileen, congrats on your placement in the Songs to Poetry contest! Enjoyed the passionate read...love and blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 10/11/2013 9:12:00 AM
Congrats on your winning work..Sara
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Date: 10/10/2013 8:45:00 PM
Hello Sweet Eileen, , Awesome Songs to Poetry ... congrats~ LINDA
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Date: 10/7/2013 8:14:00 PM
great take on the song....beautiful write...congrats on your win :)
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Date: 10/7/2013 7:36:00 PM
Soooo romantic! Congrad's on your verse winning! Light & Love
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Date: 9/15/2013 2:59:00 PM
Im happy i decided to dig in another of your poems..How beautiful and intimate this feeling is.Enticing and elegant at the same time dear.
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 9/15/2013 3:01:00 PM
Ow you look so happy in this avatar..your face is lit up with a smile..lovely dear sister friend
Date: 9/14/2013 5:51:00 PM
Light and Dark have a natural attraction don't you think. This is a remarkable write my little Desert Orchid, Sensational. Take care, Richard
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Date: 9/12/2013 4:30:00 PM
"Your work is your heart" Drake sure has a way with words as you do Eileen! This is, in my humble opinion, is one of your best if not THE best! Further to that, I have cannot express my admiration for your talents as a writer. It is an honour to know you Eileen... hugs and warm cuddlies, Jack xoxoxoxox
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Date: 9/12/2013 12:13:00 PM
Sublime! Soul bathing into the light of passion! Thank you!
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Date: 9/12/2013 9:16:00 AM
from the shadows you pen from the heart a beautiful light
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/12/2013 10:00:00 AM
Awwwww....thanks ever so much Liam. I'm glad for the visit and lovely post. :)
Date: 9/12/2013 6:58:00 AM
Check stanza 8 needs a small edit. Deserving of another ooh la la *lol* this should do very well. I have to take off soon. I have an early morning men's meeting. I did however write a poem this morning. Have a great day.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/12/2013 10:00:00 AM
Ooh la la says it all then! ;) Thanks, made the correction....Hope your day is turning out well.....
Date: 9/12/2013 12:00:00 AM
A very nice romantic poem...filled with passionate imagery. Nice use of literary elements is distributed in this piece.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/12/2013 12:35:00 AM
Thank you, Christine. I'm glad you found it to your liking. :)
Date: 9/11/2013 2:04:00 PM
Hi Eileen, A lovely and tender write.. Regards, Ken
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/12/2013 12:36:00 AM
Thanks, Ken. Tenderness is key! Thanks for stopping by...
Date: 9/11/2013 12:38:00 PM
Great rhyming. Thanks for going all the way. Haha btw light and dark do mix, in the shadow is where they kiss.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/12/2013 12:38:00 AM
What an intriguing post, Situation...Hmmmmmm...Light must win over darkness...I was trying to portray that while they were together sharing their souls, the darkness was receding in the presence of light which symbolizes truth, beauty, and all things that are heavenly. You are right, they cannot coexist. I must admit, darkness sometimes is magical! ;)
Date: 9/11/2013 10:44:00 AM
steaming with both earthy and divine flavors that likewise honor both dark and light of love... wonderful take on the theme, eileen... this is superbly quilled!..:)huggs
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/12/2013 12:39:00 AM
Thank you, my dear Nette. You are very gracious in your praise which makes my heart flutter with joy. I do thank you!!!! :)
Date: 9/11/2013 8:30:00 AM
Such elegant & expressive rhyme flow here. This is a time where, it seems, it's a good thing to embrace the shadows...even if it's for the short-term.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/12/2013 12:38:00 AM
Drake, you are a guiding light....thank you.
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Date: 9/11/2013 9:37:00 AM
The only person who should EVER set limits on expressions in poetry, is the writer. The reader has to suck it up or just not read. There's a reason we were given one power only: Choice. And, I'm telling you now, those who SAY you went too far, I can promise you that they'll read your work TRIPLE as much to watch what you say next. Your work is your heart: Passionate, deep, seductive, yet true.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/11/2013 9:27:00 AM
Elegant....thanks, Drake. i always worry that my sensual pieces are...Hmmmmm...let us say "too much!" You wouldn't believe it...I wanted to use thrust...Like in your poem...BUT...Yea...couldn't do it! HA HA! Does that make me a prude? No....NEVER! Just careful! What I mean is...Your word, Elegance, validates my write as being kosher. THAT means a great deal to me! :)
Date: 9/11/2013 8:11:00 AM
You drew me into the poem with the first two lines. Excellent write. Bravo!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/11/2013 9:28:00 AM
That BRAVO does my heart worlds of good, Jon! :) You are always so good to stop by and leave a smile. Thanks!
Date: 9/11/2013 7:32:00 AM
- Read this with a little lump in my throat .... beautiful sensitively written, Eileen ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/11/2013 9:29:00 AM
Yes....sometimes the beauty is only transitory...Yes...that does bring a lump to my throat as well, Anne Lise...Why??? Sad...Thanks for the visit! HUGS!
Date: 9/11/2013 7:09:00 AM
Oh wow, hot sultry and yet sad , lovely xx
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/11/2013 9:25:00 AM
Thanks, sweet Mandy! Yes...sometimes things are just never meant to be....THAT is very sad! Thanks for the visit, my dear! :) XOXOXOXO
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