Will Learn

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my life always directed by others freedom now a new concept hard to break old patterns Submitted on January 18, 2018 for MIDDLE JAN STANDARD CONTEST sponsored by BRIAN STRAND

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Mike Gentile

Date: 1/18/2018 2:42:00 PM

Well done, Line and it is indeed difficult but not impossible!!

Line Gauthier
Date: 1/18/2018 7:07:00 PM

Thanks for your visit, Mike. Much appreciated.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/18/2018 11:49:00 AM

So true the way of life. Like baby birds we learn to let go, to fly! Enjoyed, Line!

Line Gauthier
Date: 1/18/2018 7:08:00 PM

Thanks, Kim. Much appreciated.

Wool Man

Date: 1/18/2018 10:40:00 AM

yeah ... well if it is a pattern ... it is stitched. ... we have been thought of as sort of a ripper ... patterns are made without recognition ... when brought into true recognition ... we can hardly recognize ourselves ... or so my reflection screams ... it never sees me talking to me ... wow ... you just took an scoop from my mind ... hope it don't burn your eyes ... oh ... and good luck with your life's patterns ... stitches on me ...

Line Gauthier
Date: 1/18/2018 7:09:00 PM

Thanks for your visit, wool man. See you again.