Will I Love You Forever

WILL  I  LOVE  YOU  FOREVER?


As the sun moves o’er the sky and never ceases
To warm the life we see around us:
So  I follow my orbit around you
And stop for nothing even for a moment.

To warm the life we see around us
I search constantly for your sweet love 
And stop for nothing  -  even for a moment -
On   my  unending  journey.   

I search constantly.  For your sweet love
I will forsake  anything and everything.
On  my  unending journey 
There are no hesitations or stops.

I will forsake anything.   And everything  -
Everything  -  in my life points only one way.
There are no hesitations or stops
In the glow and flow of  your radiant  warmth.

Everything in my life points only one way  -
So,  I follow my orbit around you,
In the  glow and flow of  your radiant warmth, 
As the sun moves o’er the sky and never ceases.

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Written for  Paula Swanson’s  Contest    “Pantoum”
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Gorelick Avatar
July 28, 2011 at 3:34 PM
Well done..congrats on your win...BG
Sweetheart Avatar
July 27, 2011 at 6:17 PM
Congrats Sydney on your wonderful win in Pantoum ...
Culverhouse Avatar
July 27, 2011 at 1:46 PM
Enjoyed reading and congrats on the well deserved win in the contest!!
Brown Avatar
July 27, 2011 at 11:10 AM
Congratulations on your win in Paula Swanson's "Pantoum" contest Syd. Love, Carol
Onclaud Avatar
July 27, 2011 at 11:09 AM
fair, average, sid...j/kidding!! ... this piece shines like me, lol! ...applause to you for the thrilling win! ..:) huggs!
Brown Avatar
July 26, 2011 at 7:47 AM
It feels so good to be able to sit here and read your very creative writing this morning Sydney. I do hope to come back soon and read more of your amazing work. Love, Carol
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