Get Your Premium Membership

Wilderness of Mirrors

In the wilderness of mirrors, light unravels, names forget themselves, ghosts slither between shards. her maundering gaze ~ branches bleeding black~ finds the noir stitched in afterimages. every reflection a fracture, fault lines singing under her skin. she enters her body ~ narrow , widening, monochroming ~ a hush, a hurricane. we cradle broken glass, drink the mirage, offer our hearts to the hollow. a crack, a glimmer ~ something bright leaks through. in the wilderness of mirrors, we are stitched into myth, breathing silver and smoke. our names fall away like old skin, and what is left~ shines without needing to be whole. and we vanish, soft as light.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 4/27/2025 7:43:00 PM
"and we vanish, soft as light..." That's a strong finish Billie. You have a mind for next level poetry. Every word must have it's purpose, it's individuality, while sharing itself for synergy...never lose touch of the meaning, of what you're writing about. Continuity of the words, and ideas is crucial. There is linguistic rhythm, and also conceptual rhythm. You love the language, and you have important things to reveal and say as well. Always build your poems with devotion to meaning and melody...J.A.B.
Login to Reply
Bordner Avatar
Justin Bordner
Date: 4/27/2025 7:47:00 PM
This poem possesses integrity Poetess...J.A.B.
Date: 4/26/2025 5:29:00 PM
Very deep, raw wilderness- I found this beautiful
Login to Reply
Date: 4/26/2025 11:36:00 AM
Sis this is beyond beautiful and i absolutely love that ending! What a way to end this very creatively woven poem that flows in such eloquence! Your use of words that fit the prompt theme is so impressive and i especially loved "breathing silver and smoke. our names fall away like old skin" so good! And so catchy! Stood out for me really! You always have this very unique way of expressing and this is no exception! Absolutely loved reading this! Best wishes for the contest! Sending you light always
Login to Reply
Jama Avatar
Billie Jama
Date: 4/26/2025 4:50:00 PM
Thank you so much sis. I'm glad that “breathing silver and smoke. our names fall away like old skin” resonated with you. That line carries so much of the soul of this piece. Your support and light inspire me more than you know. Wishing you endless musings.

Book: Radiant Verses: A Journey Through Inspiring Poetry