Wilderness

The crumbs never led home.
There was no turning back,
no do-overs.  The gunshot rang,
the race begun.

The race to tomorrow
where better would beget hope,
hope beget promise,
promise negate yesterdays.

Grass greener, longer, lush with
strands of dew strung
for the strung-out, like water
dropped from a hypodermic.

Wandering through wilderness
in seach of another song, a new tale
so that happily-ever-after
might sweep out all the pain.

But the detritus still blew
down the sidewalks,
down through a life spent wondering
what happened to the crumbs.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 6/3/2010 11:44:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry X2 making it through the first round Sue. I wish you the best in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/2/2010 4:32:00 PM
Congratulations on making it through the first round of the Poetry Soup contest with two poems. Best wishes in the finals. Karen
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Date: 5/31/2010 9:33:00 AM
Congrats Sue on both your entries making it to the first round of competition in Poetry Soup contest... way to go girl... good luck and thankxxx for your sweet comments today.. luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 5/16/2010 7:05:00 AM
we live and learn along gods path of life think the crumbs were for me to pick up those piece great write Sue congrats on being featured this week keep up the great writing
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Date: 5/12/2010 6:26:00 PM
what happen to the crumbs all the signals and clues and arrows that sudjested that i might love or want or notice or having been. have no hope of you finding your way here X. jhl
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Date: 5/12/2010 11:52:00 AM
Congratulations on your featured poem that says so much being able to be interpertated on the so many levels of the reader...Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara
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Date: 5/12/2010 9:56:00 AM
Yesterdays can ban't be deleted, only overcome. Liked this one. Congrats on the feature. God Bless. Vince
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Date: 5/12/2010 5:42:00 AM
Congratulations on your featured write this week.
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Date: 5/12/2010 2:26:00 AM
Congratulations on your featured write this week Sue. Hope you are doing well. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/11/2010 5:55:00 PM
Interesting perspective for the reader to reflect on. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Wishing you ongoing success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 5/10/2010 6:20:00 PM
Sue, a beautiful moving poem stiring hope and faith through the shadows of pain. Congratulations on your poem being featured. Blessings, Connie
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Date: 5/10/2010 1:42:00 PM
Many congrats on your feature this week. Rgds Janette
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Date: 5/9/2010 8:05:00 PM
Congrats Sue on your featured poem this week on the Soup... an excellent choice to feture and share...luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 5/9/2010 2:44:00 PM
Congratulations on your fine poem being featured on the Soups Homepage Sue >> James
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Date: 11/13/2009 9:09:00 PM
Excellent write, Sue, enjoyed so much... as well as your comments on my blog tonight... I do notice many poets like to put photos of their families as well as their bio photo and I thought it would be a cool idea.. but i agree... its all about the poetry...and I enjoy yours immensely...thankxxx again for your comments... luv... Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 11/4/2009 12:10:00 PM
Sue, this is truly an amazing write. A piece of your heart you left behind dear lady. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/4/2009 11:37:00 AM
A most enjoyable poem Sue, the wilderness sounds so empty, but in truth they are filled with so much. A BIG thank you for your lovely comments on my co-write with Carolyn, we thoroughly enjoy writing together >> James
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Date: 11/4/2009 10:48:00 AM
Such a profound tug at the heart strings..bringing allusions of childhood fairytales in with the image of addicts needles is haunting...most excellent write. But, I wish you didn't feel this. I wish for you rainbows around the moon. Light & Love
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Date: 11/3/2009 4:35:00 PM
Nice...enjoyed reading...Marty
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Date: 11/3/2009 4:17:00 PM
We never know what tomorrow will bring, Sue. This was a very thought-provoking write. The "crumbs" haven't led me home yet, but I'm still "wandering through wildnerness" looking for a happy ending. Very well done! Love, Carolyn
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