Wilderness

The crumbs never led home.
There was no turning back,
no do-overs.  The gunshot rang,
the race begun.

The race to tomorrow
where better would beget hope,
hope beget promise,
promise negate yesterdays.

Grass greener, longer, lush with
strands of dew strung
for the strung-out, like water
dropped from a hypodermic.

Wandering through wilderness
in seach of another song, a new tale
so that happily-ever-after
might sweep out all the pain.

But the detritus still blew
down the sidewalks,
down through a life spent wondering
what happened to the crumbs.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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June 3, 2010 at 11:44 AM
Congratulations on your poetry X2 making it through the first round Sue. I wish you the best in the finals. Love, Carol
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June 2, 2010 at 4:32 PM
Congratulations on making it through the first round of the Poetry Soup contest with two poems. Best wishes in the finals. Karen
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May 31, 2010 at 9:33 AM
Congrats Sue on both your entries making it to the first round of competition in Poetry Soup contest... way to go girl... good luck and thankxxx for your sweet comments today.. luv.. Linda-Marie..
Stella Avatar
May 16, 2010 at 7:05 AM
we live and learn along gods path of life think the crumbs were for me to pick up those piece great write Sue congrats on being featured this week keep up the great writing
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May 12, 2010 at 6:26 PM
what happen to the crumbs all the signals and clues and arrows that sudjested that i might love or want or notice or having been. have no hope of you finding your way here X. jhl
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May 12, 2010 at 11:52 AM
Congratulations on your featured poem that says so much being able to be interpertated on the so many levels of the reader...Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara
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May 12, 2010 at 9:56 AM
Yesterdays can ban't be deleted, only overcome. Liked this one. Congrats on the feature. God Bless. Vince
Brown Avatar
May 12, 2010 at 5:42 AM
Congratulations on your featured write this week.
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May 12, 2010 at 2:26 AM
Congratulations on your featured write this week Sue. Hope you are doing well. Love, Carol
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May 11, 2010 at 5:55 PM
Interesting perspective for the reader to reflect on. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Wishing you ongoing success with your writing. Karen
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May 10, 2010 at 6:20 PM
Sue, a beautiful moving poem stiring hope and faith through the shadows of pain. Congratulations on your poem being featured. Blessings, Connie
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May 10, 2010 at 1:42 PM
Many congrats on your feature this week. Rgds Janette
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May 9, 2010 at 8:05 PM
Congrats Sue on your featured poem this week on the Soup... an excellent choice to feture and share...luv.. Linda-Marie..
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May 9, 2010 at 2:44 PM
Congratulations on your fine poem being featured on the Soups Homepage Sue >> James
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November 13, 2009 at 9:09 PM
Excellent write, Sue, enjoyed so much... as well as your comments on my blog tonight... I do notice many poets like to put photos of their families as well as their bio photo and I thought it would be a cool idea.. but i agree... its all about the poetry...and I enjoy yours immensely...thankxxx again for your comments... luv... Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"
Brown Avatar
November 4, 2009 at 12:10 PM
Sue, this is truly an amazing write. A piece of your heart you left behind dear lady. Love, Carol
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November 4, 2009 at 11:37 AM
A most enjoyable poem Sue, the wilderness sounds so empty, but in truth they are filled with so much. A BIG thank you for your lovely comments on my co-write with Carolyn, we thoroughly enjoy writing together >> James
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November 4, 2009 at 10:48 AM
Such a profound tug at the heart strings..bringing allusions of childhood fairytales in with the image of addicts needles is haunting...most excellent write. But, I wish you didn't feel this. I wish for you rainbows around the moon. Light & Love
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November 3, 2009 at 4:35 PM
Nice...enjoyed reading...Marty
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November 3, 2009 at 4:17 PM
We never know what tomorrow will bring, Sue. This was a very thought-provoking write. The "crumbs" haven't led me home yet, but I'm still "wandering through wildnerness" looking for a happy ending. Very well done! Love, Carolyn
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