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Scarlet streaked with yellow I lean to breathe in her scent I reach out to feel her touch she pricks me and I bleed… bleed her scarlet fever bleed her yellow fever she needs me to bleed I need her to need me to bleed so gladly I bleed scarlet streaked with yellow... Wild like the rose, I must have vicious when in bane Swallow the aroma... Passion acknowledge the tropical beauty enjoy the inspirational tease bondage and bandages of needing, aroused by the pain aroused by the danger Inviting... Touch my wilderness I stick, you bleed stroke, with fever, chills viral & unexpected, "I am The American Plague" Wild like the rose, you must have This poem is a collaboration by Tim Ryerson and Linda (PD) Submitted for: 'The Heart of Seduction contest sponsored by Justin Bordner

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 10/15/2014 5:23:00 AM
lovely indeed. Congrats on the honourable mention :-)
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Date: 10/14/2014 12:55:00 PM
wonderful collaboration many congrats on your Honorable mention:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 10/14/2014 12:31:00 PM
- A kind word costs nothing and is still the most beautiful gift of all: Congratulations, Tim ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/14/2014 11:46:00 AM
wow, you make my heart race, tim.. big cheers on your fine win!
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Date: 4/16/2014 2:07:00 AM
Hi a lovely collab and interesting too well done xx
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Date: 4/15/2014 4:43:00 PM
Congrad's on your collaboration winning. Light & Love
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Date: 4/15/2014 12:38:00 PM
totally unique!.. sweet congrats, PD and tim... huggs
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Date: 4/15/2014 12:13:00 PM
So nice Linda and Tim... Congratulations on you all win... Verlena
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Date: 4/15/2014 10:46:00 AM
Dear Linda and Tim, The rose description sounds like what we call a "tea rose," but the magic of the encounter and the need to "bleed" are written very beautifully. Congratulations on your success in the contest! Best wishes, Carolyn
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Date: 4/15/2014 10:31:00 AM
Brilliantly collaborated poem. Congrats on the win, Tim
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Date: 4/15/2014 9:58:00 AM
Congrats to both of you, Tim and Linda...you did a great job here; very passionate. // paul
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Date: 4/15/2014 9:20:00 AM
Great write congratulations to you both.....Seren
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Date: 3/6/2014 5:45:00 PM
awe! The perfect poem.... HUMMMM! I wonder why..... hehhehe...Love Linda
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Date: 3/3/2014 11:38:00 AM
Reminds me of Mick Jagger and the Stones singing "Let it Bleed". "We all need someone we can lean on....". Good descriptiveness.
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Date: 3/1/2014 8:20:00 PM
wow, what a POEM, you two!!! Very HOT. this is sure unexpected and delightful to read. Question for ya, Tim. Soupmail.
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Date: 3/1/2014 8:31:00 AM
- A beautifully written poem, Tim (+PD). - Have a great weekend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/1/2014 8:05:00 AM
great job guys :) good luck in the competition, I thoroughly enjoyed the read love Jayne x
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Date: 3/1/2014 8:05:00 AM
opps rated ...
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