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Wild Ride

It happened when I stepped inside, "When I let one loose in the elevator" it was a smelly ride. They all cried, I just wanted to hide. The elevator stops with a hit, I almost did another fart with my split. Before I knew it, the doors opened-now I need to split. Date Written 8/1/2021 4 Place August 2021 NA's Contest Judged: 8/30/2021 Sponsored by: Constance La France

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Constance La France

Date: 9/2/2021 2:12:00 PM

Paula, congratulations on your win in my contest ~ love and serenity _ Constance

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 9/3/2021 11:52:00 AM

Thanks You, for your note and for your congratulations. It was fun to have this one win in your wonderful contest. Glad you like this "Wild Ride" write. It was so much fun to write. I hope it gave everyone a smile. Have a great/blessed day.............

Angela Crabtree

Date: 8/2/2021 4:39:00 PM

lol. I love this! :)

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/3/2021 10:32:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad you love this one. Hope I gave you a smile. Have a great/blessed day.............

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/2/2021 8:06:00 AM

I feel the drop of your embarrassment! Sometimes they or we need to exit…

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/3/2021 10:31:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad you like this fun one. You are so right, "we need to exit" fast. Have a great/blessed day.............

Gershon Wolf

Date: 8/1/2021 8:32:00 PM

Hope your pants didn't split at this point, Paula!! Actually, I prefer a banana split to all of these kind of splits.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/3/2021 10:30:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad you like this fun write. Yes, I will also take a banana split. Have a great/blessed day.............