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December.10.2025
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Wild is the Night

waking up from my sleep, I was all confused. I heard a boom as that of thunder, or the sound of a hammer striking on the anvil. trying to be up, I felt as shaky as a fawn, getting up for the first time on its stiff unfolding legs. heart began pounding, body trembled. fear hung like a heavy cloud and panic gathered like a storm. am I dead or alive? am I in a gorge or grave? grim darkness all around. my torso wriggling in acute pain. my limbs refusing to budge. I grow exasperate under arduous strain. my memory fails, body rails what’s that weight, I feel on my chest? am I pushed down into hell? or buried under earth’s rocky crust? am I dead or alive? am I in a gorge or grave? have I fallen into a deceitful trap? or caught unawares in a hunter’s snare? am I sinking into an abyss? shall I ever be freed from this mire? * * * * now I remember, having gone to bed in peace, but the night turned abruptly wild, with an earthquake of what magnitude, I don’t know. sweet sleep suddenly turned into a nightmare and joy got thistled into fright. fortunately, I was saved with minor injuries. the rescue team did a commendable job. but I see devastation all around. tremors had rocked the night, wave after wave, rupturing and displacing underground plates! the ground wobbled, buildings crumbled. fortunately I did survive, though shaken to my core. but how long will it take to recover from the night's trauma?
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January 17, 2025 at 8:07 AM
An astonishing description of the destruction, dear Valsa. The reader felt the tremors just as you did. You skillfully crafted a catastrophic calamity with your words. My congratulations on your win.
Alex Avatar
January 16, 2025 at 11:41 PM
A very grand picturesque scene is very dramatically painted. A confluence of figures of speech. Congratulations!
Ibeh Avatar
January 16, 2025 at 7:49 PM
Heartiest congratulations on your podium win in my contest with this splendid poem, Valsa. I thoroughly enjoyed it
George Avatar
January 16, 2025 at 8:56 PM
Let me repeat, it is such a pleasure, taking part in your contest. I have never felt disappointed. Thanks a lot dear Edward.
Jones Avatar
January 16, 2025 at 6:27 AM
Wow your poem pulls us into your angst and I can’t imagine how much panic would affect my feelings my heart! So glad you are a survivor Valsa! Congratulations on your win in the contest.
Tor Avatar
January 13, 2025 at 10:25 AM
An incredible account of devastation Valsa. You had the reader experiencing this earthquake. Your words were used well in creating such a devastating event. Congratulations on your win. God bless you Dear...
Kendrick Avatar
January 12, 2025 at 7:19 AM
That must have been really traumatic for you and your family plus neighbors and friends. Your winner so packed with emotions. Sara K
Empress Avatar
January 11, 2025 at 7:57 AM
Gosh, this felt so real, as if youv told us an experience that shook you and left you traumatised and shocked by the impact of that tragic night. Your way with words and how you describe things is so vivid and so moving and it really does leave readers feeling the depth of what you convey in such eloquence dear sweet valsa! I love how youv ended and also the opening lines in here, goin to bed in peace but to wake up in the middle of the night and to experience such a nightmare is beyond what words could describe, this nightmare you did depict well in such a soulful manner! A fave for me! Best wishes. Sending you light always talented soul
Rolland Avatar
January 11, 2025 at 5:39 AM
like in a nightmare, happy you wake up, so well written poet , thanks
Rodrigues Avatar
January 10, 2025 at 5:44 PM
That would be wild, terrifying and beyond! You made my heart beat fast! Great entry, Valsa!
Buhagiar Avatar
January 10, 2025 at 11:37 AM
That would have been a terrible experience. Earthquakes can be terrible. And many died in such circumstances. Great imagery, though. Best for a win, dear Valsa.
Andresen Avatar
January 10, 2025 at 5:49 AM
- A terrible night, Valsa - recover from a traumatic event isn't easy and can sometimes be a lifelong process - Good luck in the contest :) - Happy weekend :) - hugs
Cunningham Avatar
January 10, 2025 at 5:34 AM
Nobody knows what's around the corner, one minute we're enjoying a peaceful existence then everything can change in a blink of an eye. Good luck in the contest Valsa and enjoy the weekend. Tom
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