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Wild Date

Let's go out in the bright bright sun Feel the breeze and swiftly run Do a little sand art out in the beach Kill the world and we are out of reach. Vanilla strawberry we eat 'em all Jump high in the sky and let us fall Blow others' sand castles and let 'em shout And run away and laugh out loud. We buy all the balloons the vendor has Pop them at once have no regret We hire a jet ski and have a ride Splash water on others who almost dried. We go to a restaurant and then go mad Have the biggest meal we ever had Oh now we're tired we need some rest Sun bath is the best way I suggest. Ohh we will be we and we rolled People sun bathing lo and behold With marker in hands we step and storm In no time every face was drawn. I buy you all the flowers he had Pink Lilly red roses white orchards I tuck some into your lovely hairs World say bla bla but we don't care. We fly kites though we don't know how The horizon has gone pink by now We peek into each other's happy eyes And found out none of them were dry. We hold hands and set to shore The day had end but we want some more I tell you while walking down the shoreline "Oh girl you'll always be mine!!"

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Date: 10/4/2016 7:37:00 PM
Parthik, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT
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Date: 10/4/2016 6:42:00 AM
Prathik, Superb......Welcome to Poerty Soup. Good entry with a nice poem. Hope u will enjoy PS very much. Keep on writing..........//:) with love
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Date: 10/4/2016 3:52:00 AM
Papthik, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Parthik Bhandari
Date: 10/4/2016 5:13:00 AM
I'm grateful to you Linda. Thank you very much for giving your time to my poem. I'm definately going to read you poems. .... I'm kinda a romantic poet. Haha.... I like to write about love and love only. I've plenty of poems with me and I'm looking forward to post them. Hope you enjoy them. And 'Linda', i love than name..????. I'm looking forward for your reply.

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