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Wild Birds Contest ~ Sponsor: Shadow Hamilton ~ November 3, 2023

I glide with agility and swiftness from azure height
With keen eyes intent on finding a morsel to devour
My screeching cries are echoed as blaring screams
On pinioned wings, I fly where hidden quarry lies

My shadow is feared by many on hills and fields
I watch tiny feet scurry in search of a place to hide
I am a red-tailed hawk, who's feathered plumage
is crimson as if painted by a master artist's hand

Songbirds stop trilling when I soar in the sky
Dreading they'd be on the menu as my next meal
My feathers have often made a fine poet's quill
I am beautiful and wild, revered, brazen and bold

With sharp talons, I am perched on an aspen branch 
Meadow grasses beneath me, I search with inspection
I am a bird of prey that some have labeled a 'raptor'
but I'm busy building a nest with the help of my mate.

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Date: 11/25/2023 2:55:00 PM
Back with congratulations Lin! :)
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Date: 11/23/2023 4:22:00 PM
A great poem full of joy and freedom congrats on your 3rd place hugs Shadow
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Date: 11/7/2023 4:09:00 PM
They are magnificent creatures as you describe so well Lin. They are the leading hawk of 18 species in my home state. I see them frequently over the fields surrounding my house. You have done them justice with your captivating imagery. :)
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Date: 11/8/2023 7:24:00 AM
Hi Linda. I really appreciate your information as well as your fine remarks. Thanks ever so much.
Date: 10/23/2023 8:33:00 PM
Birds are certainly poems in flight. Thank you for this poem on one of America's favorite birds.
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Date: 10/24/2023 2:32:00 AM
Thank you so very much, Hilda.
Date: 10/23/2023 7:50:00 AM
Lin, you captured the essence of a hawk, a wonderful personification poem.
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Date: 10/23/2023 7:55:00 AM
Hi Tania and thanks very much.
Date: 10/23/2023 4:12:00 AM
such wonderful personification Lin, i didnt need a picture to imagine the vivid detail:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 10/23/2023 4:35:00 AM
Thanks, Jan. Be safe while you’re away.
Date: 10/22/2023 3:13:00 PM
Lin, I once was so enraptured by the flight of a raptor over an open field that i almost fell on me arse in dizziness....
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Date: 10/22/2023 3:37:00 PM
Ah, John. I would’ve done the same. Precision and beauty matched by few who soar. You were fortunate to have witnessed it in flight. Thanks.
Date: 10/22/2023 9:31:00 AM
You have captured the essence and soul of this creature in this insightful write. It is like you take us along in it's mind. Bravo Lin! Good luck for contest!
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Date: 10/22/2023 10:10:00 AM
Merci, Karen. Soooo happy you took flight with her…and me. Thank you.
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