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Wild Birds Contest ~ Sponsor: Shadow Hamilton ~ November 3, 2023

I glide with agility and swiftness from azure height With keen eyes intent on finding a morsel to devour My screeching cries are echoed as blaring screams On pinioned wings, I fly where hidden quarry lies My shadow is feared by many on hills and fields I watch tiny feet scurry in search of a place to hide I am a red-tailed hawk, who's feathered plumage is crimson as if painted by a master artist's hand Songbirds stop trilling when I soar in the sky Dreading they'd be on the menu as my next meal My feathers have often made a fine poet's quill I am beautiful and wild, revered, brazen and bold With sharp talons, I am perched on an aspen branch Meadow grasses beneath me, I search with inspection I am a bird of prey that some have labeled a 'raptor' but I'm busy building a nest with the help of my mate.

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Date: 11/25/2023 2:55:00 PM
Back with congratulations Lin! :)
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Date: 11/23/2023 4:22:00 PM
A great poem full of joy and freedom congrats on your 3rd place hugs Shadow
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Date: 11/7/2023 4:09:00 PM
They are magnificent creatures as you describe so well Lin. They are the leading hawk of 18 species in my home state. I see them frequently over the fields surrounding my house. You have done them justice with your captivating imagery. :)
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Date: 11/8/2023 7:24:00 AM
Hi Linda. I really appreciate your information as well as your fine remarks. Thanks ever so much.
Date: 10/23/2023 8:33:00 PM
Birds are certainly poems in flight. Thank you for this poem on one of America's favorite birds.
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Date: 10/24/2023 2:32:00 AM
Thank you so very much, Hilda.
Date: 10/23/2023 7:50:00 AM
Lin, you captured the essence of a hawk, a wonderful personification poem.
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Date: 10/23/2023 7:55:00 AM
Hi Tania and thanks very much.
Date: 10/23/2023 4:12:00 AM
such wonderful personification Lin, i didnt need a picture to imagine the vivid detail:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 10/23/2023 4:35:00 AM
Thanks, Jan. Be safe while you’re away.
Date: 10/22/2023 3:13:00 PM
Lin, I once was so enraptured by the flight of a raptor over an open field that i almost fell on me arse in dizziness....
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Date: 10/22/2023 3:37:00 PM
Ah, John. I would’ve done the same. Precision and beauty matched by few who soar. You were fortunate to have witnessed it in flight. Thanks.
Date: 10/22/2023 12:17:00 PM
a wonderful personification, Lin. You created a perfect image of the bird of prey...I could actually feel its talons. I loved "I'm beautiful and wild, revered, brazen and bold." Perfect. Best wishes with the contest, Sara
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Date: 10/22/2023 1:12:00 PM
Sara, you are always exceedingly generous with your encouraging comments. Forgive my lapse in returning mine to you. Hugs and thanks for letting me the lines you preferred. That’s always interesting to me.
Date: 10/22/2023 9:31:00 AM
You have captured the essence and soul of this creature in this insightful write. It is like you take us along in it's mind. Bravo Lin! Good luck for contest!
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Date: 10/22/2023 10:10:00 AM
Merci, Karen. Soooo happy you took flight with her…and me. Thank you.

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