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Wild Birds Contest ~ Sponsor: Shadow Hamilton ~ November 3, 2023

Wild Birds

I glide with agility and swiftness from azure height
With keen eyes intent on finding a morsel to devour
My screeching cries are echoed as blaring screams
On pinioned wings, I fly where hidden quarry lies

My shadow is feared by many on hills and fields
I watch tiny feet scurry in search of a place to hide
I am a red-tailed hawk, who's feathered plumage
is crimson as if painted by a master artist's hand

Songbirds stop trilling when I soar in the sky
Dreading they'd be on the menu as my next meal
My feathers have often made a fine poet's quill
I am beautiful and wild, revered, brazen and bold

With sharp talons, I am perched on an aspen branch 
Meadow grasses beneath me, I search with inspection
I am a bird of prey that some have labeled a 'raptor'
but I'm busy building a nest with the help of my mate.
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Fowler Avatar
November 25, 2023 at 2:55 PM
Back with congratulations Lin! :)
Hamilton Avatar
November 23, 2023 at 4:22 PM
A great poem full of joy and freedom congrats on your 3rd place hugs Shadow
Fowler Avatar
November 7, 2023 at 4:09 PM
They are magnificent creatures as you describe so well Lin. They are the leading hawk of 18 species in my home state. I see them frequently over the fields surrounding my house. You have done them justice with your captivating imagery. :)
Lane Avatar
November 8, 2023 at 7:24 AM
Hi Linda. I really appreciate your information as well as your fine remarks. Thanks ever so much.
Greenhough Avatar
October 23, 2023 at 8:33 PM
Birds are certainly poems in flight. Thank you for this poem on one of America's favorite birds.
Lane Avatar
October 24, 2023 at 2:32 AM
Thank you so very much, Hilda.
Kitchin Avatar
October 23, 2023 at 7:50 AM
Lin, you captured the essence of a hawk, a wonderful personification poem.
Lane Avatar
October 23, 2023 at 7:55 AM
Hi Tania and thanks very much.
Allison Avatar
October 23, 2023 at 4:12 AM
such wonderful personification Lin, i didnt need a picture to imagine the vivid detail:-) hugs jan xx
Lane Avatar
October 23, 2023 at 4:35 AM
Thanks, Jan. Be safe while you’re away.
Lawless Avatar
October 22, 2023 at 3:13 PM
Lin, I once was so enraptured by the flight of a raptor over an open field that i almost fell on me arse in dizziness....
Lane Avatar
October 22, 2023 at 3:37 PM
Ah, John. I would’ve done the same. Precision and beauty matched by few who soar. You were fortunate to have witnessed it in flight. Thanks.
Jones Avatar
October 22, 2023 at 9:31 AM
You have captured the essence and soul of this creature in this insightful write. It is like you take us along in it's mind. Bravo Lin! Good luck for contest!
Lane Avatar
October 22, 2023 at 10:10 AM
Merci, Karen. Soooo happy you took flight with her…and me. Thank you.
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