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''Wild and Untamed''

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I met George one spring day as he cruised by, so sexy he was a dreamy dream on a big motorcycle and I was so young and at a lovely fanciful age, a butterfly we spent our days riding the country roads our nights under the stars in parks and beaches, kissing I could not bring him home to my parents he was wild, untamed and a free-spirit soaring on wings and oh so romantic George was my blue sky and I was so in love one day he said to me, lets go to Florida we will leave for Daytona Beach today I was thinking of mother and father not approving, hesitating but the idea of the open road was appealing I emptied my bank account that day packed some stuff in an old backpack and better judgement was left behind in our dust as we stormed away oh, it was wonderful with the wind in ours faces and the blue sky above our black leather jackets flapping in the wind in tune with the soaring roar we stopped in small towns along the way slept in cheap motels at night oh, it was romantic we arrived at Daytona Beach and spent two wonderful weeks nothing fancy like restaurants or shopping just amazing love that I have never, ever forgotten I often think of George and what he is doing, now _______________________ April 12, 2015 Free Verse Submitted to the contest, Romantic Poem (old/new), sponsor, Skat Ninth Place

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Sandra Haight

Date: 12/7/2015 4:06:00 PM

Some really wild memories, Broken Wings! Enjoyed your write very much. Congratulations on your win. Hugs, Sandra

Constance La France
Date: 12/7/2015 4:24:00 PM

Sandra, thanks so much for visiting and for the congratulations !

Punnia Viswan Bhatia

Date: 12/7/2015 10:07:00 AM

aww..romantic...congrats on the win dear :)

Constance La France
Date: 12/7/2015 3:04:00 PM

Remnants, thanks for visiting and for the congrats, appreciate !

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 12/6/2015 11:56:00 PM

What a romantic beauty broken.. congrats on big win! All those memories to reminisce.. very lovely !

Constance La France
Date: 12/7/2015 8:13:00 AM

Upma, thanks for that nice comment and the congrats ~

Scott Williams

Date: 12/6/2015 11:44:00 PM

Wow! Naughty girl. Sounds like a great time. Congratulations on your win.

Constance La France
Date: 12/7/2015 8:14:00 AM

Scott, oh the days of wild and crazy and naughty, well apparently they are over, would never ever do that now... thanks for the congratulations ~

Skat A

Date: 12/6/2015 5:22:00 PM

Broken <3 Congratulations on your wonderful ROMANTIC win. Thank you for supporting my contest. Stop by my romantic blog "No Barriers." Help celebrate each and every win by dropping by with a nice and sweet congratulations. You never know, you might want to pick out a few titles to read and enjoy. Pass the encouragement, every smile counts. Forever & Ever **SKAT**

Constance La France
Date: 12/6/2015 8:06:00 PM

Thank you so much Skat for my placement in your contest, I am honored ~

Duke Beaufort

Date: 11/22/2015 3:56:00 PM

Sounds like an experience not to forget. Yes, we wonder about these things, but life is often irreversible in this regard. We make choices and go down a certain path in the end. You had a lot of courage at the time to take the risk and go. Perhaps one day, you might meet again and see where time has taken him.

Constance La France
Date: 11/23/2015 7:54:00 AM

Duke, thanks for visiting my poetry, oh yes, I guess I was a bit wild and untamed back then also, oh yes, I often think of Geroge, but have never searched for him, the past is beautiful and I do not want to destroy it with reality ~

Lin Lane

Date: 11/22/2015 12:37:00 PM

poem... you wrote a poem here? I'm still looking at the picture... ummm I was only looking at Harley! Seriously, BW...thanks for the story and the picture. You're a good writer.

Constance La France
Date: 11/22/2015 2:21:00 PM

Lin, thanks for the visit and the fun comment, and the compliment, so appreciated

Jill Spagnola

Date: 11/22/2015 11:06:00 AM

Constance, your pen brought up memories of sharing young, rebel love for me...:), jill

Constance La France
Date: 11/22/2015 2:22:00 PM

Jill, oh yes, it was a time to rebel and just be in love, thanks for visiting ~