Wife Has Given a List of Few Items To Buy

wife has given a list of few items to buy
                        husband after seeing has exhaled a big sigh
                      items were of one kg honesty two bags of love
                      five kg of kindness so he given her a hefty shove
                    with shy she said Oh! my love, to win you let me try 


                    For contest: Sponsored by Carol Eastman
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Misra Avatar
June 10, 2016 at 11:36 AM
Congratulations on your win, Devnath. Made me smile.~karam~
Devnath  Avatar
June 10, 2016 at 11:54 AM
Thanks my lovely friend for your wishes. Loved always, bl
Kimathi Avatar
June 9, 2016 at 8:14 AM
Congrats for your WIN with these humorous lines, BL!! ;-)
Devnath  Avatar
June 9, 2016 at 12:33 PM
Thanks my lovely friend for your wishes. Loved always, bl
Chansarkar Avatar
June 8, 2016 at 3:15 PM
Funny BL,congratulations to youi:)
Devnath  Avatar
June 8, 2016 at 3:26 PM
Thanks my lovely friend for your wishes. Loved always, bl
Gregory Avatar
March 28, 2016 at 9:39 AM
So much for asking for wat u want.
Devnath  Avatar
March 28, 2016 at 9:45 AM
Thanks my lovely friend for your beautiful comment. Loved always, bl
Andresen Avatar
March 24, 2016 at 3:08 PM
- So sensible said - A clear 7 ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Devnath  Avatar
March 24, 2016 at 3:10 PM
Thanks my lovely lovely friend for your appreciation and 7. Loved always, bl
La France Avatar
March 23, 2016 at 11:44 AM
BL this is so sweet, I love it 7 ..
Devnath  Avatar
March 23, 2016 at 12:59 PM
Thanks my lovely friend for your sweet comment and 7. Loved always, bl
Allison Avatar
March 22, 2016 at 5:55 PM
aww this is rather touching BL and made me smile:-) hugs Jan xx
Devnath  Avatar
March 23, 2016 at 11:17 AM
Thanks my lovely friend for smiling comment, loved always, bl
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