Widow's Walk

The rail is cold beneath her palms,
Fingers curling, knuckles white.
Her face is smooth, expression calm,
Stomach burning, heartstrings tight.
The wood is worn, the floorboards creak -
Pacing footsteps through the night. 
By raging sea, her tired eyes seek
A hopeful glimpse, a hopeless sight.
And in her mind, his face is etched -
A distant memory from this height. 
With hair blown back and arms outstretched,
She appears ready to take flight.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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A  Avatar
September 22, 2015 at 7:07 PM
Heather, congratulations on your win. SKAT
A. Sharma Avatar
September 22, 2015 at 1:06 AM
Wonderful expressions Heather! Congrats on big win!
Allison Avatar
September 20, 2015 at 4:21 PM
beautiful yet sad imagery Heather many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
Y. Avatar
September 20, 2015 at 4:08 PM
Heather ,congratulations your win:-) Alexis
Hunter Avatar
March 8, 2013 at 6:23 AM
This is myterious...it leaves a lot to think about...will she fly?
Duncan Avatar
December 23, 2012 at 8:10 PM
Love it,,,,, reminds me of historical romance,,, which I used to read ;} Have a Merry Christmas Season ;}
Ryerson Avatar
December 10, 2012 at 7:04 AM
Absolutly breathtaking and heartbeaking, Heather...So glad I was lucky enough to run across your poetry...I'm a fan! - Tim
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
December 10, 2012 at 6:35 AM
Congratulations on your HM Heather love xx
A   Avatar
December 9, 2012 at 2:55 PM
Heather, congratulations with your awesome win..in the Skitty Skat Contest.... thank you for everything. ~Always & Forever~ PD
A  Avatar
December 9, 2012 at 2:28 PM
Congrats in my contest, . ~SKAT
Bayles Avatar
December 3, 2012 at 6:25 PM
I like this poem, Heather, and the rhymes work well.
Palmer Avatar
November 15, 2012 at 5:17 PM
great write Heather,love it,on the edge
Dietrich Avatar
November 14, 2012 at 3:07 PM
wow, what a vivid portrait of a woman "on the edge" well done!!!!
Kendrick Avatar
November 14, 2012 at 1:01 PM
I can just see this lady who is pacing hoping to see the ship come in with her man...Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Sara
J.T. Avatar
November 14, 2012 at 11:33 AM
this is well done. Your words paint the picture so vividly - JH
Lamoureux Avatar
November 13, 2012 at 4:18 PM
Please don't jump! Wow a lot of emotions here, well done!
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