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Widened Eyes White

Perspiration beads my beleaguered brow, running in rivulets down cheeks aglow. A hazy miasma the air does plough, electric energy begins to flow. Distant rumblings, crowned palm trees start to shake, gorgeously lush green fronds partner their dance. Waves rippling the ground harbinger earthquake, eerie silence, then lightning’s jagged lance. An earth shrieking crescendo tears dark skies, a tsunami of sound deafens each mind. Birds of Paradise scream with fearful cries, as two tectonic plates viciously grind. Silence resumes, a young friend lifts his head, widened eyes white within a dusky den. I speak, “See brother we live we’re not dead, dispela wantok bilong Jackson Ken.” Footnotes: I lived in Papua New Guinea for four years in the 1990’s. The earthquake was 6.5 on the Richter scale, epicentre within 50 mile away. Jackson Ken is a young Papua New Guinean man whom I befriended and who ended up working for the company that I was managing. The last line is Pidgin English, widely spoken in P.N.G., its root bases are German, Dutch and ‘modified’ English. It basically means that this fellow/man (dispela, which is me) is a cousin brother (wantok, usually associated with another member of your own village) belonging (bilong) to Jackson Ken.

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Date: 8/6/2010 4:34:00 PM
sweet poem at the end and yet scary to have lived through...I would not want the esperience.
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Date: 8/6/2010 12:13:00 PM
Congratulations Chris on your win in Deborah Guzzy's contest "Somewhere Over the Rainbow". Love, Carol
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Date: 8/4/2010 7:11:00 PM
Congrats on the 11th place win, Chris
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Date: 8/4/2010 4:26:00 PM
Chris, Congratulations on your win with this creative and informative piece. It was entertaining and fun to read. Aloha, Connie
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Date: 8/4/2010 2:45:00 PM
Thank you Deborah and Linda-Marie, I'm still not sure if I can respond to individual comments or not so I'll do it this way. I greatly appreciate you both enjoying this piece. P.N.G. was an amazing place and there are lots of true stories, of which this is one. It turned out that Jackson Ken was the son of a village chieftain. I visited his village once and met his #1 mother and shared food with them. She was his birth mother, but his dad had 6 wives!! Blessings, Chris
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Date: 8/4/2010 11:50:00 AM
Congrats Chris on your super win in Debbie's contest with this amazing write.. enjoy your special win ..with luv..
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Date: 8/4/2010 8:10:00 AM
What an experience, my Dad was there and said small boys sat in your room at night to kill the spiders..shiver! Thanks for the great adventure! Congrad's on your WIN! Light & Love
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