Premiere Contest WinnerWhy We Were Terribly Loved and Terribly Spoiled

Small town hospital in Chariton, Iowa, USA
1952
Dr. Yocum had a recurring dream every night for weeks
God was telling him that he had to buy an incubator.

In 1952
An incubator cost $100,000!

He finally broke down and bought it.
My identical twin and I were born at three pounds each.
We were five weeks early

That incubator saved our lives.
Dr. Yocum’s wife felt invested in us.
She bought us tiny pink going home outfits with matching hats and booties.

We were in the hospital for two months!
Our mother's blood would not clot, so we almost lost her.
She was in the hospital a month or two longer than us.

We went home to grandma and grandpa with seven aunts and uncles
They fought over who was going to carry us around.
Mom told us we were TERRIBLY spoiled by the time she got us.

Written 5-20-2022
Poetry Contest: Divine Intervention
Sponsor: Chantelle Anne Cooke
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Kauffman Avatar
May 31, 2022 at 10:43 AM
Caren, congratulations on your podium trophy! What an amazing story! I don't know why I am stilled amazed when God shows up! Maybe awed is a better word - the ability to remain open to God's miracles in a spirit of wonder! Hope you are having a wonderful birthday celebration! Sending both of you blessings! Thank you for sharing your beautiful birth story! That incubator gifted the world with a poet who has inspired and delighted many people and students!
Poteet Avatar
May 28, 2022 at 8:04 PM
Congratulations on your fine description of the details of God's divine intervention in the lives of those who trust Him. Blessing on you and your twin, i wish you both a Happy Birthday early
Krutsinger Avatar
May 29, 2022 at 3:19 AM
Thank you Reason A Poteet My identical twin will be here on my birthday - in two days!
Goldsmith Avatar
May 27, 2022 at 8:33 AM
Congratulations on your win. WOW!!! A wonderful story/write. "Happy 70th Birthday" Have a great/blessed~~day/weekend/birthday...........
Krutsinger Avatar
May 27, 2022 at 10:37 AM
Thank you. We will be 70 years old on Tuesday of next week.
Alex Avatar
May 26, 2022 at 9:36 PM
Great writing. Congratulations!
Krutsinger Avatar
May 27, 2022 at 10:37 AM
Thank you - just the facts.
Marcum Wong Avatar
May 26, 2022 at 9:02 PM
How wonderful this beautiful story got the trophy Caren. Big Congratulations! Blessings xxoo
Krutsinger Avatar
May 27, 2022 at 10:41 AM
Thank you Connie
Watt Avatar
May 26, 2022 at 4:29 PM
Caren, thank God for those dreams, for the good doc and his wife, for your mother's recovery, and for your loving family who took you in as newborns for all those weeks. Divine intervention indeed! Congrats on your winning poem, and thanks for sharing your inspirational story!
Krutsinger Avatar
May 27, 2022 at 10:41 AM
Thank you so much!
Rodrigues Avatar
May 26, 2022 at 3:47 PM
Beautiful story from an amazing storyteller! Congratulations on your first place trophy win, Caren!
Krutsinger Avatar
May 27, 2022 at 10:42 AM
Thank you Kim
Mcintosh Avatar
May 26, 2022 at 3:18 PM
How amazing... so wonderful. Love it. God bless you friend. Love, Gina
Krutsinger Avatar
May 27, 2022 at 10:42 AM
Thank you Regina
Poet Avatar
May 26, 2022 at 1:35 PM
This is a very touching and well-written tale, many congrats on your well-deserved top-winner Caren. Blessings
Krutsinger Avatar
May 27, 2022 at 10:42 AM
thank you Sotto
Logan Avatar
May 26, 2022 at 1:25 PM
A story that touched my heart and a wonderful ending.
Krutsinger Avatar
May 27, 2022 at 10:42 AM
Thank you Jenna
Hankins Avatar
May 26, 2022 at 12:51 PM
CONGRATULATIONS on your Trophy win with this poem, Caren. I am very proud of you!!!!!!
Krutsinger Avatar
May 27, 2022 at 10:43 AM
Thank you Hank. I was shocked!
Hankins Avatar
May 20, 2022 at 11:17 AM
I'll bet you were both cute as buttons! Obviously it was meant for you two to be here.
Krutsinger Avatar
May 21, 2022 at 6:07 AM
Obviously as we are BOTH still here, and our 70th birthday is next Tuesday!
Seeker Avatar
May 20, 2022 at 5:12 AM
Wow! An amazing divine intervention indeed, thanks for sharing
Krutsinger Avatar
May 21, 2022 at 6:09 AM
Thank you - totally true story. A little addition- Daddy had signed all the paperwork required to go to the Korean War except ONE paper that needed his signature. May 31st was the day he HAD to sign that last paper or be in big trouble. Something kept telling him "don't sign it YET". The recruiter kept bugging him to sign it. We were born and he did not have to sign it, because if you had one child you had to sign all the paperwork and enlist. If you had two children, you were exempt.
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