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Why Tears?

Who cares? Noone does. Why tears? Victim's buzz. Why hate? 'cause of this and that. Its already late! the waiting death bed. There is no time, to be depressed; losing life the prime, every second distressed. Get up, work and dance, with thy wounds bloody; girl this is only chance, to sing this melody. This cut is fine-gem, thy bruises are jewels; embrace and kiss them, the beauty, see, yells.

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Date: 6/29/2024 10:08:00 AM
Dear Anjali, your poem has an enduring message and is potent both in emotion and in the questions posed. Hopefully we can find the strength in adversity and beauty in sadness and pain. I adore your vivid imagery, personification and vibrant contrasts "this cut is fine-gem,/thy bruises are jewels".. I enjoyed the irony and the sharp urgent rhythm of your poem. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 7/1/2024 1:34:00 AM
its heart warming if poem conveys what it had to. Thanks

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