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Why Must the Sun

why must the red sun set so suddenly I can't make my mark for it's grown dark my one chance is gone why May 27, 2020 Ninette Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Emile Pinet

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Date: 5/28/2020 12:19:00 AM
I like that the beginning and end words are the same. It makes the question more impactful. Seems there's never enough time in the day.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 5/28/2020 11:16:00 AM
Thanks for your thoughts and appreciation, Juliet. Best of wishes. :)

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