Why I write

For velvet vanity and silver sanity
I write to unite mind and heart on sleeve
To free myself while imprisoning God in me
I write to escape at the same time I chase
My own path and wrath just to save face
I write to erase my sins and rewrite them 
But this time with a whimsical smile 
For a spoonful of sugar 
helps the medicine go down
And like the rabbit 
I love a good hole
To sink into
I write because I feel less alive
When I do not
Yet when I do I am not satisfied 
So for me it is a passion
That I endure brief periods of time
I wanted to be eloquent and 
Instead I form words like
A babbling brook splashing
Thrashing about hoping to travel
From one place to another 
In the end I am the only one wet

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Date: 5/16/2025 11:22:00 PM
Such a creative take on why you write, Karen. Write on!
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Karen Jones
Date: 5/17/2025 1:17:00 AM
Thanks for reading Andrea!
Date: 5/14/2025 9:46:00 AM
So many reasons why we write! Very lovely, and enjoyed your thoughts about it - <3
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Karen Jones
Date: 5/14/2025 5:28:00 PM
Paige I appreciate you reading and glad you enjoyed! Thanks!
Date: 5/14/2025 2:58:00 AM
I love this, Karen! Such a joy to write poetry…to explore our inner and outer universe, the light and dark…what a privilege! Hugs ~ Kim
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Karen Jones
Date: 5/14/2025 5:25:00 PM
Thanks for the love Kim! Where would us poets be if we couldn’t write? Hugs
Date: 5/13/2025 7:23:00 PM
keep splashing, it is refreshing. lovely write dear poet. Happy writing.
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Karen Jones
Date: 5/14/2025 1:05:00 AM
Thank you for your kind comment!
Date: 5/12/2025 6:57:00 PM
Very interesting, uniting your mind and heart on your sleeve - great!
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Karen Jones
Date: 5/13/2025 12:50:00 AM
Hi David! Thanks kindly!
Date: 5/10/2025 1:07:00 AM
I really enjoyed some of your word choices. A talented write / one I related to until you mentioned not being satisfied. I may tweek and tweek, but a good spilling does satisfy. Way to go, Katen. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
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Karen Jones
Date: 5/10/2025 7:06:00 AM
Happy weekend CayCay! No I'm usually looking at what I could have done better or differently. The poems I feel good about are usually the ones others don’t notice. lol Thankd for reading!
Date: 5/8/2025 7:27:00 PM
'I write b/c I feel less alive when I do not.' That about sums it up for me too, Karen. ~ Honesty is the Best Policy, gw
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Karen Jones
Date: 5/9/2025 12:38:00 AM
lol hugs thanks for sharing
Date: 5/8/2025 9:13:00 AM
Love the play on words throughout this piece!!! Enjoyed!
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Karen Jones
Date: 5/8/2025 10:45:00 AM
You are kind! So glad you enjoyed! Thanks
Date: 5/8/2025 6:36:00 AM
I love your use of language here... Especially how you have paired your words.. so no words like a babbling brook here...
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Karen Jones
Date: 5/8/2025 8:16:00 AM
Really? Huh! I wasn’t sure it should be shared but I did anyway! lol thank you
Date: 5/8/2025 2:57:00 AM
Wonderful yet simple, keep it up and I love " To free myself while imprisoning God in me ". For God's image to shine like a star afar so that who don't believe in Him could see His glory through us. Thank you and I love it.
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Date: 5/8/2025 3:03:00 AM
Itumeleng thank you for your encouraging comments! So honored you read and love this. God bless you!
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