Why I Weep

I'm named a willow tree and live in grace,
the whole of me distinctive in its shape.
My elegance well suits this lush landscape
of hillocks flung across the field I face. . . 
and gentle rills meander through this place.
In spring I don a long virescent cape
comprised of many supple arms that drape
to earth and, with Eve’s shadows, interlace.

Oh, countless times Sun’s flecked my every leaf
and Sky distilled her stars as night would creep.
Young lovers, though, have fled, their time so brief.
They used to spread a cloth to eat; then sleep
beneath me in my shade. They knew no grief. . .
Not privy to their destiny, I weep.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Gauthier Avatar
April 13, 2018 at 9:04 PM
Lovingly penned, Andrea.
Cozart Avatar
November 7, 2017 at 9:05 AM
This is beautifully written.
Bhattacharya Avatar
May 17, 2017 at 9:04 AM
The happy willow of the beginning, reaches a point of personal agony at the emotional climax of the poem. Fascinating.
Grasso Avatar
December 19, 2016 at 10:05 AM
Was poking around back here on one of your early pages and found this wonderful sonnet to love. ...Fran
Godwin Avatar
November 25, 2016 at 7:18 AM
Andrea, Tim and I stumbled upon this - really. AND WHAT A blessing that stumble was, this is most beautiful. Not only were we both touched, but Tim listened and learned Iambic Pent from your poem (I told him it would be near perfect or perfect). So, we enjoyed being with you and your poem this morn. Oh, happy day to you ... CayCay
Robinson Jr. Avatar
November 23, 2016 at 1:43 AM
Beautifully creative poem, Andrea. The vivid description of the willow tree combined w/the capriciousness of human relationship as seen thru the eyes of the willow tree is a true work of art. Great poem, dear lady. Love and joy to you.
Puddifoot Avatar
June 14, 2013 at 3:46 PM
at last I found it! yes, I can see how similar our trees are but I think yours puts mine to shame, and I see it won 1st place, I'm not surprised, congrats sonnet queen :)
A   Avatar
June 6, 2013 at 8:38 PM
a wonderful win... Andrea... congrats.. Linda
Macfarlane Avatar
June 6, 2013 at 8:01 PM
Lovely poem Andrea....willows are my favorite trees and you stated just what a willow would say so beautifully. Big congrats! Hugs
Johnson Avatar
June 6, 2013 at 3:12 PM
Inspired poem Andrea. Congratulations on your no. 1. Love, joyce
Arowolo Avatar
June 6, 2013 at 2:09 PM
Wonderful and lovely piece,Andrea...Nice Sonnet..Congrats on your well deserved win in this contest..
Posey Avatar
June 6, 2013 at 12:10 PM
WOW! Number ONE.... well deserved... and why am I not surprised.. Great work, Darlin'..... Jake
Dillard Avatar
June 6, 2013 at 11:17 AM
While we might know their (young lovers)destiny, the willow holds their secrets for eternity. I enjoyed your sonnet today. It went well with the much needed rainfall of the night. RAY
Sefunmi Avatar
June 6, 2013 at 8:26 AM
Congrats on your win!
Curry Avatar
June 6, 2013 at 8:22 AM
wow! great poem. I know now that trees feel. deserved win. congrats. randy
Hunter Avatar
June 6, 2013 at 6:16 AM
Im faving this one for sure. The feel of the end of it is almost King Learish.(or I guess I should say Shakespearean) Does that make sense? Just the gravity and simplicity of the end...I weep...makes me think of King Lear..."He dies." The simplicity of this is genious and you deserve this win. Congrats!
Hamilton Avatar
June 6, 2013 at 4:30 AM
congrats on your lovely winning poem stunning Shadow
Gildersleeve Avatar
June 5, 2013 at 6:50 PM
Andrea congratulations on your brilliant win. Warm Smiles, Connie
May Avatar
June 5, 2013 at 3:16 PM
another gem Andrea...congrats on a great win
Gorelick Avatar
June 5, 2013 at 2:16 PM
I was so happy to see your win in my contest. Nothing new for you!! Please send me your address so I can get your prize out to you..
Horsman Avatar
March 19, 2012 at 7:37 AM
wonderful willow, truly poetic. harry
Arno Avatar
January 27, 2012 at 6:40 PM
Love the imagery Andrea. Great job Best regards, Jon
Onclaud Avatar
January 26, 2012 at 12:56 AM
pressed for time but read your superb piece, andie girl.. a generic message of delightful cheers for your greeat win!..:) huggs!
Susan Avatar
January 25, 2012 at 1:47 PM
wow! I love how you described this. "With Eve's shadows, interlace...Sun's flecked my every leaf" - so beautiful :) congrats on your win!
Quigley Avatar
January 25, 2012 at 9:40 AM
Yup. In another life, you would definitely be a willow. Nicely written Andrea
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