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Why I Should Win 1st Place

My trophy stands so lovely there Certain of winning all the while— Miracle I pray; it's just fair That verses cast spells which beguile! Dated: 3/01/2019 Sponsor by: Bobby May Contest: I am a Winner Title of Poem: Why I should win 1st Place

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Alexis Y.

Date: 3/12/2019 8:09:00 PM

Hi Nette, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on your 1st place win. It was well deserved:-) Alexis

Charles Messina

Date: 3/12/2019 7:55:00 PM

..and fair it be.. Lol Congrats Nette, hugs // charlie

Eve Roper

Date: 3/6/2019 8:09:00 PM

Nette, fantastic well written poem with feeling. Congratulations on your awesome win. Hugs Eve ~`*

Bobby May

Date: 3/5/2019 9:20:00 AM

Congratulations on your 1st Place win!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/3/2019 4:53:00 AM

Reads like a good contender. Way to go. Thanks for dropping by ...I know it would be fair for you to get #1..Sara

Robert L. Hinshaw

Date: 3/2/2019 5:31:00 PM

I predict this splendid entry will nab lst Place Nette, and its true that your writes "cast spells which beguile". Thx for your kind comments re my entry. As an aside, I'm reading a book titled Rampage by James M. Scott describing the horror and suffering of the people during the occupation and the battle for Manila during WW11. Bob