Why I Loved C D's Poem - Following Footprints
Following Footprints
(By Carolyn Devonshire)
Following footprints in the sand
Across the beach, down to the sea
I picture you, hardy and tanned
Always joyful, always carefree
Your righteous path is hard to trace
Following footprints in the sand
Such soft impressions waves erase
I wish you could lead, take my hand
When you were with me, life seemed grand
I wasted not one bit of time
Following footprints in the sand
For with you, any hill I’d climb
We’ll meet again; I’ll join you soon
Our long-lost friends will be on hand
To launch our cosmic honeymoon
Following footprints in the sand
(This beautifully flowing rhythmic Quatern I chose because I liked its depiction of positive approach to life even if the grand times of togetherness are gone as the loved one walks away leaving soft footprints on the sand of time. The desire to meet again following the footprints on cosmic honeymoon is glorifying hope that never dies.)
August 21, 2021
Contest : Celebrating Carolyn's Poetry : An Uncontest
Sponsor : Andrea Dietrich
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