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im siting her next to you, my heart starts beating fast, I'm so happy to be with you, but I'm sad cause I know this my last, time for me to go come so quick, together time flies, when we're apart it moves so slow, when I look into your eyes it hurts, yet still i stare into them while I have the chance, since last I seen you true pain I've gone through but at least I started to heal, I say goodbye for now, I love you still and always will,

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Skat A

Date: 4/4/2015 8:07:00 PM

ASHLEY, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/29/2015 10:44:00 AM

Ashley, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends @-> LINDA <-@

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/29/2015 9:09:00 AM

- A small greeting and warm welcome, Ashley :) - Thank you for choosing to share your poems here at the P- Soup - Looking forward to read many poems from you in the future - // Anne-Lise :)

Honestly J.T.

Date: 3/28/2015 1:19:00 AM

Nicely done. I really enjoyed reading this poem and I hope to read more from you here on Poetry Soup. If you need advice, I will help in the best way possible -JT