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No blood upon the dagger, Thou the cuts you've made run deep. Only tears upon my pillow, Where I've cried myself to sleep. No rings of gold could save us, When no promises you would keep. 2/10/2021 Bite size poem no 22 poetry contest Sponsored by Line Gauthier

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Date: 6/29/2022 1:41:00 AM
Beautifully sad….Debx
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Date: 10/17/2021 5:03:00 PM
Aw so sad and well written!
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Simon Hamill
Date: 10/17/2021 5:10:00 PM
Hi karen.thank you for your comment.take care.simon.:-)
Date: 10/7/2021 10:03:00 AM
been there done it got the t-shirt
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Date: 10/5/2021 3:14:00 AM
Well done, Simon!
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Simon Hamill
Date: 10/5/2021 3:30:00 PM
Hi kim.thank you.simon.:-)
Date: 10/4/2021 2:26:00 PM
aww this emotional piece certainly packs a punch Simon:-( hugs Jan xx
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Simon Hamill
Date: 10/4/2021 4:54:00 PM
Hi jan.thank you.i wrote for everyone who has been cheated on.take care.simon.:):)
Date: 10/3/2021 1:55:00 PM
Could feel the sadness in your words Simon. Good luck in the contest. Emilia : )
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Simon Hamill
Date: 10/3/2021 3:50:00 PM
Hello.i just like to write when I'm on my own.hope your doing ok.you not posted for a few days.i keep checking on you.lol.take care.simon.:-):-)

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