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Whose Memories Are These

Whose voices, whose memories are these That warble in trees, exalting my breeze Applauding the daybreak's cerulean grin Where amber ocher designs are floating in Is that your echo from the cobalt blue sky Wondering aloud about dawn's tepid sigh As the morning evoked destiny's knowhow And birdsongs lauded the blessings of now When rays of romance in day's golden start Painted my vistas, charming your heart A smile you adorned on the saddles of arc Reminiscent of the past, igniting my spark I recognize the appeal your passions reveal In intimate presence that meadows feel-- From way back when in allure of moonlight Sensuous lips we kissed of an indelible night Though it was love, it was never expressed And those feelings afire never got blessed So they arise to voice what could have been Augmenting the dialogue of battles within April 21, 2019 Poem of the week for the week beginning 4/28/2019 Placed 2nd:What was left unsaid contest by Line Gauthier HM: Your choice (5) contest by Brian Strand

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Valsa George

Date: 2/13/2022 3:21:00 AM

Everything can't be expressed in words or a single glance.... ! Waves of romanticism keep surging one after another on hearing and seeing the wondrous scenes and sounds of nature. Lovely poem Vijay!

Brandy Nicole

Date: 6/11/2019 7:14:00 PM

Congratulations Vijay, on this win. Your thoughts touch my heart. ~ Brandy

Marilyn Williams

Date: 5/4/2019 2:38:00 PM

I'm impressed. Like a verse of a song. Its well done. Congrats to you on your POTW.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/4/2019 2:47:00 PM

Many thanks Marilyn..much appreciate.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/2/2019 8:01:00 PM

back a third time, this time to say WOw. POTW. Congrats to you!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/3/2019 5:22:00 PM

Thank you Andrea..much appreciate your third visit and kind words.

Judy Ball

Date: 5/2/2019 10:36:00 AM

Beautiful words expressing the sorrow for what could have been but never was. Great job here. Loved it. Congrats on POTW Well deserved. God Bless, JB

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/2/2019 3:06:00 PM

Thank you Judy..much appreciate.

Silent One

Date: 5/1/2019 12:37:00 PM

Brilliant choice for POTW, a deep love poem.. we always rue that which was never said..

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/1/2019 1:55:00 PM

Many thanks SO..much appreciate your kind remarks.

Panagiota Romios

Date: 5/1/2019 9:34:00 AM

Congratulations on so well penned a poem. A FAV Blessings Panagiota

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/1/2019 1:55:00 PM

Much appreciate..thank you Panagiota.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 5/1/2019 1:08:00 AM

I loved this wonderful poem Vijay so I am back to congratulate you on your deserving POTW honors! : ) xxoo

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/1/2019 1:54:00 PM

Much appreciate Connie..many thanks.

Maria Williams

Date: 4/30/2019 8:02:00 AM

I am so thrilled to see this brilliant poem being awarded POTW Vijay. A big Congratulations my dear friend....Maria Hugs

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/30/2019 12:10:00 PM

Many thanks my friend..much appreciate.

Constance La France

Date: 4/29/2019 7:45:00 PM

Vijay, congratulations on POTW with this awesome writing !

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/30/2019 12:10:00 PM

Much appreciate..many thanks, Dear Heart.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 4/29/2019 2:39:00 PM

Returning to congratulate you my dearest friend, Vijay!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/29/2019 2:45:00 PM

Many thanks my friend. Much appreciate.

Manmath Dalei

Date: 4/28/2019 1:11:00 PM

CONGRATULATION ON YOUR POTW. VERY BRILLIANT AND DEEP WRITE. A 7+ FROM ME. HUGS...………..//MANMATH//

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/28/2019 4:05:00 PM

Much appreciate the kind remarks..many thanks, Manmath.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 4/28/2019 12:08:00 PM

Congrats on POTW and your win in the contest.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/28/2019 4:04:00 PM

Much appreciate Richard..many thanks.

Besma Riabi Dziri

Date: 4/28/2019 12:04:00 PM

As you master the beauty of poetry, you exquisitely penned what is left unsaid! leaving your avid reader yearning for "what was never expressed"! Congratulations, dear Vijay, on your POTW! Happy for you to see your amazing poetry honoured and highly valued. My deepest regards. Blessings.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/28/2019 4:04:00 PM

Such a joy to read your wonderful comments..much appreciate..many thanks for the return visit, Besma. Regards.

Sunlite Wanter

Date: 4/28/2019 9:58:00 AM

Yes, we tussle with the "dialogue of battles within." Such beautiful poetry. Congratulations!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/28/2019 4:02:00 PM

Much appreciate the visit and comments, SW..many thanks.

Brandy Nicole

Date: 4/28/2019 8:42:00 AM

Sometimes those words left unsaid, touch the heart even more. Silence can pull at every emotion. Congratulations Vijay, on Poem of the Week. ~ Brandy

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/28/2019 4:01:00 PM

Your return visit is so appreciated, Brandy. Always a joy to read your comments. Many thanks.

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 4/28/2019 7:52:00 AM

Powerfully penned, poignant! Excellent flowing piece Vijay, congratulations on POTW :) xomo!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/28/2019 4:00:00 PM

Much appreciate the kind remarks..many thanks Maureen.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 4/28/2019 7:12:00 AM

Beautiful verse Vijay that I missed, congrats on your win and also for POTW. Tom.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/28/2019 4:00:00 PM

Thanks for reading, Tom..much appreciate..many many thanks.

Heidi Sands

Date: 4/26/2019 7:43:00 AM

This is a perfect poem for the contest Vijay! Beautifully written and I love the last stanza! Powerful ending to a poem is great. Well done! :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/26/2019 11:12:00 AM

I haven't seen your poems in a while..so glad to see your comments..much appreciate Heidi..many thanks.

Paul Callus

Date: 4/25/2019 2:49:00 PM

An excellent entry for the topic "What was left unsaid", Vijay....and many years later one will still wonder about what could have been...undoubtedly an entry that merits a high placement. Regards // paul

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/25/2019 5:21:00 PM

Thank you Paul your kind feedback..much appreciate your visit and comments.

Panagiota Romios

Date: 4/25/2019 1:34:00 PM

Totally beautiful..what might have been. Can become an inner heaven that I turn into a reality. Don't know if I make sense. I just declare it to be so,)) Panagiota.,

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/25/2019 5:21:00 PM

Much appreciate your comments Panagiota..many thanks.