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my grandfather died from black lung working in a mine that wasn't his and now all this time cautious of the dark and the damp i can't seem to find my own mine so turning silently i become a mime and ask you to understand my gestures as if a jester in your court am trying to court you by holding my breath while holding my throat throttling in hopes you will guess and then i'll be able to gasp but your yours is not mine and as the batteries of the sun dim not sinking just being less of a beam for me to follow i stop and swallow that last gasp of air as my ears clearly hear the song dark as a dungeon down in the mine

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Date: 12/15/2019 8:48:00 PM
This one crawls under the skin. xomo
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Jeff Connelly
Date: 12/15/2019 9:35:00 PM
My grandfather was a miner and died of black lung.
Date: 12/15/2019 4:28:00 PM
great use of metaphor... this one runs deep... like the heart confessing a love not yet had... well crafted Jeff... enjoyed the read... hugs
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Sandra Adams
Date: 12/15/2019 8:33:00 PM
sorry to hear that...i never met my one grandfather either, he died young as well...
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Jeff Connelly
Date: 12/15/2019 8:04:00 PM
Thank you Sandra. I never met my grandfather because he did truly die from black lung before I was born.

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