Whose

my grandfather
died from black
lung working in
a mine that wasn't

his and now all this
time cautious of the
dark and the damp i
can't seem to find my

own mine so turning
silently i become a
mime and ask you
to understand 

my gestures as if
a jester in your
court am trying
to court you by

holding my breath
while holding my
throat throttling
in hopes you

will guess and then
i'll be able to gasp
but your yours 
is not mine

and as the batteries
of the sun dim not
sinking just being
less of a beam for

me to follow i stop
and swallow that
last gasp of air
as my ears 

clearly hear
the song
dark as a
dungeon

down
in the
mine
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Pigeon Tart Avatar
December 15, 2019 at 8:48 PM
This one crawls under the skin. xomo
Connelly Avatar
December 15, 2019 at 9:35 PM
My grandfather was a miner and died of black lung.
Adams Avatar
December 15, 2019 at 4:28 PM
great use of metaphor... this one runs deep... like the heart confessing a love not yet had... well crafted Jeff... enjoyed the read... hugs
Adams Avatar
December 15, 2019 at 8:33 PM
sorry to hear that...i never met my one grandfather either, he died young as well...
Connelly Avatar
December 15, 2019 at 8:04 PM
Thank you Sandra. I never met my grandfather because he did truly die from black lung before I was born.
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