Who's With Me

This world has fallen apart Though I can't remember when it was really any different Us humans sure have lots to learn I'd say we're millennia away from learning the secret The secret to getting along with other And ignoring petty differences or hunger for power No one is going to live forever so while we're here Makes sense to me, shouldn't we all make a better attempt At peace and tranquility rather than tear at each other's throats Is it really something us so-called human beings Are basically not capable of or what The vast majority of folks I know are law-abiding and peace-loving Wouldn't that be a game changer Can you imagine, all the nations of the world at peace Let's start a love and peace revolution WHO'S WITH ME... ah, you over there... that's one... any more What??? You think this is a pipe dream!!! LOL<>
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Date: 7/31/2018 1:17:00 PM
I am with you, but unfortunately there is so muxh hated in peoples mind that such a thingwill never happen, we are not millenia away but even till eternity people can't achieve it there is hated in the name of religion, social status, race, I wonder that when human beings will accept that we all are children of Adam and are same, I dream of a perfect world where black and white lives together, poor and rich share happiness, there is only ne religion, religion of love, but it is only a dream
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Jack Ellison
Date: 7/31/2018 3:30:00 PM
Beautiful... "the religion of love"!!! Absolutely a perfect way to express it! You are a very clever individual, my friend!!! I am extremely impressed! This is just a pipe dream with tongue in cheek...cheers, Happy Jack
Date: 7/31/2018 7:25:00 AM
If everybody smoked the pipe, then you may have someth'n ;) xomo <3
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Jack Ellison
Date: 7/31/2018 7:32:00 AM
Yes, I do... are you with me??? Lovesies, Happy Jack XOX
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