Whos War

Every time they incite me against you
they tell me you are my enemy
And every time they incite you against me
they tell you am your enemy
They themselves never have enemies
Not that they are at peace with everybody
But because there are no enemies at all

Every time they declare war between us
they tell me to fight for my constitutional rights
And they tell you to fight for your patriotic rights
But themselves never participate in the wars
Not that they have no rights to fight for
But because they use us to fight their wars

They turn their differences to our war
and make us fight for their power
And when they get to the high echelons
they never look back at us 
As we lay our slain,
they celebrate their victory

If the enmity is between me and you
We shall declare our war
And if the fight is for our rights
We shall determine whether to fight
We shall let their difference be their differences
And their wars be their wars
If somebody must fight,
Let it be them not us.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 9/10/2023 5:12:00 PM
What a fantastic poem! No, more than a poem a declaration of peace.
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Cyrus Theuri
Date: 9/10/2023 10:26:00 PM
Indeed Joanna, peace is paramount. Thanks for reading~Cyrus
Date: 9/15/2022 4:20:00 PM
I hope a lot of "them" are hearing what you're saying. Peace my friend, Bill
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Date: 9/8/2022 4:11:00 PM
Hey, listen to Joanna. Elizabeth
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Date: 9/7/2022 10:05:00 PM
This poem is so profound, so true, so glaring in its clarity. If only all of us would wise up and realize that we are all one. No borders, no country, no clan. One nation, one people, one world, one love! Thank you for your wonderful poetry, beautiful words, and mindful insight.
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Cyrus Theuri
Date: 9/8/2022 11:31:00 AM
Hi Joanna, thanks so much for this observations. It is indeed sad that people don`t realize how beautiful the world would be if only we would embrace peaceful co-existence.
Date: 9/7/2022 6:06:00 PM
I like your collection of poems shared here and this one is very pertinent to current events in Europe, Asia and the Middle East. In lines 1 and 3 I think you mean "incite" rather than "insight". In line 11 you could insert "they" after "But" to emphasise the guilt of the military commanders.
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Date: 9/8/2022 11:37:00 AM
Hi John, thank you so much for reading and for the observations made. I indeed meant incite in lines 1 and 3. I am editing accordingly. Cheers!
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