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Shivering in shadows
Severed from the saving grace of truth
Darkness lingers clutching
In corners  deep and dank
Luringly with half truths
In deeper  holes of rank
Was it so bad to cast a slur
To pose a threat that wasn't there
To cause a group of hopeful players
to kneel and beg in soulful prayers
What harm could come from causing guilt
To herd them all like willing sheep
Believing heaven waits to tilt
And judge them for their souls to keep
Shivering in shadows
Or am I getting warmer?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 9/7/2008 7:50:00 PM
Very interesting poem - I guess everybody has their own belief system - God Bless
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Date: 9/5/2008 4:19:00 PM
Much to think about here. Nice use of alliteration. Yes, "saving grace of truth." What a wonderful thought. Intersting title. Keep on writing! Karen
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