Whom

The wife just fell off of the bed
Looked me straight in the eye and said,
"Whatever we've done
Can only be fun
Whatever you do, don't tell Fred!"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Krutsinger Avatar
March 17, 2022 at 2:22 AM
I hope Fred was not asleep in the next room.
Wolf Avatar
March 6, 2022 at 5:24 PM
I see that you have your interrogative pronouns squared up, Rico. Mine are 'Whose?' and 'Who-dat-dere?!' Smiles, Gershon
Roper Avatar
March 6, 2022 at 11:11 AM
hahahaha.... .. surprise she didn't hurt her neck like my next door neighbor...
George Avatar
March 5, 2022 at 7:41 PM
Fred I suppose is their common friend, but more 'friendly' to the wife !
Brown Avatar
March 5, 2022 at 4:48 PM
Hi! Rico, Who is Fred? I enjoyed Limerick. Thanks for the smile. Blessings ~ Debra
Hankins Avatar
March 5, 2022 at 2:00 PM
And who, do I ask is "Fred?" I think you should probably find out, Rico.
Roper Avatar
March 6, 2022 at 11:12 AM
he didn't say his wife, he said the wife :)
Cunningham Avatar
March 5, 2022 at 11:34 AM
Lol, who's Fred.
Leffanta Avatar
March 6, 2022 at 10:15 AM
As luck would have it, I don't know anyone named Fred, but I can confirm we did have fun! Aloha!
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