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Who Was He -Childrens Christmas Story

once upon a christmas day when the children had came out to play there in the snow on the ground a baby was there that they found the baby was as white as the snow and his cheeks had such a glow. he was wrapped in a blanket of red and the snow was his bed. most children would have cried from the cold. but he was laughing or so i was told. his laughter was quite different. it wasn't a ha-ha-ha. but a ho-ho-ho. the children picked him up to take him inside to show their parents their brand new find. the parents shocked and dismayed none knew- just what to say. who would have the heart to put this child abandoned in the snow. his body temperature from what i see is as perfect as can be. now you know that the police are forty miles away. what can we do, what can we say. we have no phone and very little gas should we keep him, or should we pass? there's not enough food to go around and now another mouth that you found. the baby lying in the bed pointed up above his head waved his finger all around and food came tumbling to the ground. he waved his finger one more time and at their feet, christmas boxes galore like you'd find in a department store. all with labels with their names clothing, shoes, and electronic games. looking at the baby in total surprise there came a gleam in his eyes. the baby laughed his ho-ho-ho- again. 'this is for you my wonderful friends.' you helped others when you couldn't help yourselves and shared the little bread with others and called them your sisters and brothers. now it's time for you to receive for all the kindness that you've achieved. and quick as a lightning he was gone. but he left the red blanket to carry them on. now my children i must ask who was the one that created this task? faith and love will rule this world teach it to your boy and girl.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 12/14/2011 7:57:00 AM
Wishing you glad tiding for the upcoming Holiday Season Louis. It is the time of year to reach out to old friends and new friends as well. As the old year ends and the New Year arrives I wish blessings to you and yours always. May you be blessed with inspiration and see your writing endeavors cascade upward in 2012. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/13/2011 3:09:00 PM
Faith and love to you to. Beautiful Christmas story Louis. - "Christmas is coming" - OXOX Love from Norway and Anne-Lise
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Date: 12/13/2011 3:33:00 PM
thank you so much anne , and i'm glad you enjoyed it. GOD BLESS

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