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Two old friends (who haven’t seen each other in quite some time) running into each other on the corner of Linwood and Clairmount — A Detroit westside encounter Man, it’s good seeing you Joe, how is ... Aw, Moms doing just fine. And you’re looking very well yourself, Jimmy. As a matter of fact, Moms mentioned your name the other day when she was talking to ... Yeah, I saw Mrs. Poe just the other day too. She said Pearl asked about me. That she wanted to know was I still ... Nah. I told Pearl that you and Sylvie ain’t together no more. That y’all split up some time ago. Back when ... Now don’t tell me, Big Pete never got that thing straightened out, when he got into an accident in Sylvie auntie’s car. The way I hear it, wasn’t ... You heard right, Jimmy. It’s a shame really. Mr. Lewis had no business calling Lester to come do that kind of work. Bea Bea didn’t like that one bit. Said she was gonna ... I know, I know. But, Sammie didn’t have the right connections like Bea Bea thought he did. Come to find out ... Yep. You heard ‘bout that too. Seems when the dices rolled crap on Charlie Lou, that only ... Joe, I would’ve too. Ain’t no need in everybody coming up short. Especially, after what happened with ... Don’t tell me Little Louise didn’t. After all that time, you would think ... Well, some people ain’t got good judgment, even if the law said you could ... I’m with you, Jimmy. That’s the sort of thing you gotta work on the down low, real quiet like. Can’t nobody ... You better believe it. It’s the hush-hush type of business you keep to yourself. And to think, Mr. Oscar knew about it too. If only ... Yeah, but Marge said that train left the station a long time ago. Well, Jimmy, it was so nice ... Likewise, Joe. It was so good catching up on things, but don’t ... You ain’t gotta worry ‘bout that, Jimmy. My lips are shut tight. Only thing is ... Aw, I wouldn’t worry ‘bout that too much. Mabel sho’ ain’t. She don’t even remember why Claire started ... Even still, my lips are sealed. Good deal, old friend. Hope to see you much sooner than this last stretch of time. Maybe when ... I hope so too. Jessie, wouldn’t mind seeing that co-op thing happen. She says it could blow up big time. Bye-bye old pal. By the way, if you run into ... Nah, Joe. Myra and Frank don’t need to know nothing ‘bout what Junior did. That ain’t nobody’s business but Roscoe, Tina and Junior’s, okay. Okay. Hope to see you soon. It’s been too long a time as it is. It’s hard to find out what’s going on, when old friends ain’t seen each other in so long. They end their brief encounter with the customary exchange of the old slave saying: Hey bro, remember to ... Keep the secrets real quiet ... Always under lock and key. Never ... Let ‘em know a blessed thing ... Keep it just between you and me.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 12/11/2017 1:38:00 PM
Hello Freddie, this was a great read. I h ave enjoyed it. Love and Peace and Joy always, my friend.
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Date: 12/9/2017 12:17:00 AM
Yes. Code breakers unite! Ha ha this was great Freddie. An amazing story that you told prefectly.
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Date: 12/8/2017 6:12:00 PM
oh wow, my question was answered at the end of this one. Yep, they have carried on the tradition of speaking in code! I could not follow it, but it was sure a heck of a ride, Freddie!! Very clever.
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Date: 12/8/2017 4:29:00 PM
Freddie you continue to amaze me with your creativity, this is one of many examples, well done my friend...
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Date: 12/8/2017 3:47:00 PM
This felt so real as if i was standing next to them watching and listening to them. Awesome story telling my dear friend... hugs and smiles and loves always :)
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Date: 12/8/2017 10:56:00 AM
Very creatively written again Freddie. You do so well with bringing things to us in a way no-one else can! Have a great day :)
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Date: 12/8/2017 10:54:00 AM
What a delightful original pen Freddie! Enjoyed :) much love! xomo
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Date: 12/8/2017 9:40:00 AM
This conversation feels so real and authentic--well written discourse between friends--like the way the chat keeps lingering in the end.
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Date: 12/8/2017 8:12:00 AM
Very entertaining exchange Freddie. You have quite a unique style. Enjoyed reading this :) ~ Judy
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