Who Needs Good Deeds

Good deeds -- who needs
The good deed doers.

Good news -- we do
Need those goodly doers.

Goodness -- let us bless
The good doers of deeds.

Good for us -- we needn’t fuss
With those in need of good deeds.

Good grief -- what a relief
There are goodly doers of deeds.

Good for you -- and me, it’s true
Good deeds show also our needs.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Dietrich Avatar
January 9, 2011 at 3:20 PM
this is really cute and a wise too! Luv, Andrea
Duffin Avatar
January 9, 2011 at 9:34 AM
Hi Deb. Once again you have given me something to aim at. Words crafted to the zenith with a twist of humour that we all need at times. A moral in the tail also. Wonderful. Eamon
Pettit Avatar
January 8, 2011 at 3:16 PM
I'll just say it's good
Kendrick Avatar
January 8, 2011 at 1:42 PM
Good luck in the contest if this is an entry..Reads like a winner to me..I am glad that I chose this one to read this afternoon..Sara
Gorelick Avatar
January 8, 2011 at 1:32 PM
Wow, a tongue twister with a message..I like it! BG
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