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Who Is Your Neighbor- For Contest

I espied him in his designer suit
Such a looker, he’s REALLY cute

This morning he waved and shot me a grin
Oh how I would love a date with him

Think I’ve managed to catch his eye
Got my heart set on a handsome guy

I knocked on his door  …he was wearing a dress
I just stood there gawking I must confess!

Just who is my neighbour - I’m not so sure
But any dream of romance was premature!

Contest Who is my Neighbour
Sponsor Mystic Rose
09~03~15

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Old Buck October 13, 2015 at 3:15 PM Just browsing through one of my favorite writers works when I was fortunate to stop here. Well Done Jan. oldbuck Jan Allison October 13, 2015 at 3:21 PM Aww thanks Old Buck always a pleasure to have you stop by:-) hugs Jan xx

Fred Chitanga October 4, 2015 at 12:24 PM I thought i knew where it was heading till the part where you knocked on the door ... Hilarious Jan Allison October 4, 2015 at 12:28 PM I love to write with humour whenever I can Fred:-) hugs jan xx

Bill Lindsay September 16, 2015 at 10:38 AM made me smile ;) Jan Allison September 18, 2015 at 8:31 AM Thanks Bill:-) hugs Jan xx

James Inman September 15, 2015 at 8:51 PM Funny, Jan. Jan Allison September 16, 2015 at 2:49 AM Thanks James I do try to male people smile:-) hugs Jan xx

Tammy Reams September 15, 2015 at 6:31 PM Congrats on your win Jan. Really a cute write. Jan Allison September 15, 2015 at 6:32 PM Thanks for dropping by Tammy:-) hugs jan xx

Kim Merryman September 14, 2015 at 10:01 PM A truly entertaining write, Jan! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim Jan Allison September 15, 2015 at 1:04 AM Thanks Kim:-) hugs Jan xx

Sandra Haight September 14, 2015 at 4:08 PM Such a cute, funny neighbor poem with an unexpected twist, Jan! Congrats on your win! Hugs, Sandra Jan Allison September 14, 2015 at 4:10 PM Thanks Sandra just a fun write thankfully it has never happened to me lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich September 14, 2015 at 3:24 PM BIG congrats and so well deserved. Jan Allison September 14, 2015 at 3:26 PM your poem was ace weel done:-) hugs jan xx

Eve Roper September 14, 2015 at 1:51 PM Back to congratulate you on your win Hugs Eve Jan Allison September 14, 2015 at 1:55 PM Many thanks Eve for all your support:-) hugs jan xx

Skat A September 14, 2015 at 1:24 PM Jan, Congrats on your, Who Is Your Neighbor win! SKAT Jan Allison September 14, 2015 at 1:34 PM Thanks Skat:-) hugs Jan xx

Kp Nunez September 14, 2015 at 11:28 AM lol! Huge smile on my face even as I type this Jan. Congrats! Jan Allison September 14, 2015 at 11:30 AM LOl Thanks Kim I had fun with this:-) hugs Jan xx

Alexis Y. September 14, 2015 at 7:44 AM Jan, Congratulations on your win it was well deserved:-)Alexis Jan Allison September 14, 2015 at 10:43 AM Thanks Alexis:-) hugs Jan xx

Anu Nayak September 13, 2015 at 9:37 AM DEAR Jan, wow! hahaha i enjoyed...what an imagery!you are awesome Jan! a 7! Jan Allison September 13, 2015 at 9:49 AM Thanks Anu just a fun write for the contest:-) hugs jan xx

Eve Roper September 8, 2015 at 8:40 PM You are so good, another winner. Hugs Eve Jan Allison September 9, 2015 at 1:08 AM I write for fun Eve if I win its great as long as I get some reads I am happy:-) hugs jan xx

Duke Beaufort September 8, 2015 at 6:23 PM And so the mind wanders. It's a real incite into the human brain--the way you write. Some of us have a very active fantasy life and seeing someone attractive sets off a whole lot of noise. It is just too funny. Jan Allison September 9, 2015 at 1:07 AM Thanks Duke:-) hugs jan xx

Richard D Seal September 6, 2015 at 6:13 PM That grin was probably in admiration of what you were wearing Jan lol. Good luck in the contest. Take care, Richard Jan Allison September 7, 2015 at 1:06 AM Pure fiction write Richard - you never know what happens behind closed doors though:-) hugs jan xx

Phyllis Babcock September 4, 2015 at 12:53 PM Ha ha you had me laughing envisioning the this scene. Wonderful funny poem. love phyl Jan Allison September 4, 2015 at 1:09 PM Oh I can just imagine it Phyllis lol - not sure if it will be what Vienna is after for the contest but I have to go with the flow of my pen:-) hugs jan xx

Dr. Upma A. Sharma September 3, 2015 at 11:59 PM U rock with this one Jan, well hope sets the mark! Gl in contest! Jan Allison September 4, 2015 at 12:11 AM Thanks Dr Sharma:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich September 3, 2015 at 9:55 PM hahaha. YOu are on a ROLLLL Jan Allison September 4, 2015 at 12:10 AM Not sure if Vienna is after humour but I have to go with my muse! hugs Jan xx

Njeri Hunjeri September 3, 2015 at 8:04 PM Lol, so hilarious. I enjoyed! Jan Allison September 4, 2015 at 12:10 AM Thanks Njeri:-) hugs Jan xx

Afolabi Muideen September 3, 2015 at 3:48 PM Hum!!!! I love the flow of this write and the beautiful imagery......gOOd luCK in the contest......always love Jan.......A.M. Jan Allison September 3, 2015 at 4:08 PM Thanks Afolabi:-) hugs Jan xx

Matthew Anish September 3, 2015 at 3:05 PM A regular J Edgar Hoover tale! Good luck in the contest! Peace & Love Matthew Anish Jan Allison September 3, 2015 at 3:06 PM Thanks Matthew:-) hugs Jan xx

Frederic Parker September 3, 2015 at 2:20 PM I'm finding you have a deep sense of humor..You are from the land of Benny Hill...good luck in the contest Jan Allison September 3, 2015 at 2:22 PM I have tried to write with humour whenever I can Frederic:-) If I can make someone smile with my words that makes me happy :-) hugs Jan xx

Constance La France September 3, 2015 at 1:33 PM Jan, this is HILARIOUS for the contest, delightful, yes nowadays we girls don't know , they look so normal.... and thanks for visiting my poem, through the eyes . . . ~~ Jan Allison September 3, 2015 at 1:38 PM Thanks so much Broken Wings:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen September 3, 2015 at 12:38 PM - No one knows what happens behind closed doors :))) - Love it, Jan :)- I wish you good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Jan Allison September 3, 2015 at 1:37 PM I'm not sure if it's what Vienna is after but I have to go with the flow of my pen and its in humourous mood:-) hugs Jan xx

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