Who Is Your Neighbor

We had some neighbors with a sign, “Do Not Disturb.” They’d vanished when a moving van came to the curb. How thrilled we were to learn new folks were moving in. Would they make that old house look neater than a pin? Originality they did not lack! They started painting everything, and everything was black! We feared the value of our property would drop next door to this atrocity. They would not stop! We noticed many other things that seemed to us bizarre. That pair would only paint by night and neither had a car! The sign “Do Not Disturb” remains, so now we think about the fact we’d never seen our former neighbors moving out! Behind their house is where we saw them the first time. We’d heard them digging in the night, but that is not a crime! My spouse peeked out the window. Working fast, and with no sound, that couple started planting bushes on a wide fresh mound. It spooked us, and I pray they didn’t see our curtain lift while spying. They’re at home all day. I think they work night shift! Our house is now for sale; we stay indoors with our two cats. Before each dawn, I swear I hear the sound of bloody bats! Written 9/12/2015
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Lindsay Avatar
September 20, 2015 at 5:34 AM
I heard that you've already bought it ... ;) Cleverly done. ((( On another note, can you tell me where to find the contests other than those which appear on the sidebar? I seem to miss most of them )))
Sietesantos Avatar
September 18, 2015 at 9:36 AM
Brilliantly creepy and amusing write! I enjoyed the read from your oh so crafty pen! Congratulations on your win, Andie!
Wigley Avatar
September 16, 2015 at 12:05 AM
My God, Andrea- you're next door to the Addams family! woooooooo..... Great write. Viv x
Laurie Avatar
September 15, 2015 at 10:07 PM
G'day Andrea... heard of this bizarre behaviour before. It's a ploy used to buy houses cheaper than market price. Bloody scary though - thanks Andrea - Lindsay
Anish Avatar
September 15, 2015 at 10:02 PM
Sounds like you are living near the Adams family. Interesting!
Muideen Avatar
September 15, 2015 at 6:39 PM
What and excellent penned Andrea... I love the flow of your piece, your penned it beautiful and great. Contrats in your win.......A.M.
Reams Avatar
September 15, 2015 at 6:17 PM
Congrats on your win Andrea! A wonderful and scary write!
Lamoureux Avatar
September 15, 2015 at 7:44 AM
I would be moving too! This was fun.
Roper Avatar
September 14, 2015 at 10:26 PM
Funny! Congratulations on your win ! Hugs Eve
Merryman Avatar
September 14, 2015 at 9:43 PM
Ha!Ha! With neighbors like that, I'd sell my house too! Congrats on your 1st place win, Andrea! Love, Kim
Maverick Avatar
September 14, 2015 at 2:47 PM
I see a win was achieved with this spooky write of yours Andrea, well done..'
Inman Avatar
September 14, 2015 at 2:09 PM
Nice Andrea, loved your take on the contest.
A  Avatar
September 14, 2015 at 1:23 PM
Andrea, Congrats on your, Who Is Your Neighbor win! SKAT
Nayak Avatar
September 14, 2015 at 9:50 AM
Congrats dear Andrea on your big win!....love, Anu:-)
Ober Avatar
September 14, 2015 at 9:44 AM
Oh, wow!! This one had me laughing and completely creeped out all at the same time! Big congrats on your win :)
La France Avatar
September 14, 2015 at 8:57 AM
Andrea, congratulations on your win with this beauty and thanks for visiting my poem, river . . .
Konos Avatar
September 14, 2015 at 8:04 AM
We are Your Moon and You are Our Snow! CONGRATULATIONS neighbor!
Cheema Avatar
September 14, 2015 at 7:59 AM
Andrea, a lovely win! Hugs Balveen
Allison Avatar
September 14, 2015 at 7:44 AM
Am glad its a fiction write Andrea think I'd move too lol congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
Y. Avatar
September 14, 2015 at 7:12 AM
Andrea, congratulations on your 1st place win it was well deserved:-) Alexis
Williams Avatar
September 14, 2015 at 3:13 AM
Well done, Andrea. Very fun to read. I couldn't wait to get to the next line to see what new mischief your frightful neighbors had gotten into.
Seal Avatar
September 13, 2015 at 6:51 PM
I am of a nervous disposition Petal, please refrain from scaring me like this lol. Funny write, nice twist, now hurry up and get out of there, we can't do with you going missing. Take care, Richard
Tor Avatar
September 13, 2015 at 1:15 PM
Andrea would you rather live next to Elvis lol. Nice write.
Dietrich Avatar
September 13, 2015 at 5:29 PM
YES!! Better than a bloody vampire. hahaha
Y. Avatar
September 13, 2015 at 12:05 PM
Andrea, those are some bizarre neighbors! The "creepy" kind of neighbors. Good descriptive write with a twist. Ever thought about a who done it type of short story book? If you wrote one you would have the reading going and they won't know what expect:-)Alexis 7
Dietrich Avatar
September 13, 2015 at 5:29 PM
Alexis, the one idea I ever had for a book involved a mystery and a huge twist. But I can't even get started with it. I sit there and cannot even begin it. (Oh to be a Stephen King!)
Pinet Avatar
September 13, 2015 at 10:48 AM
Sounds like you live next to the Munster's, with their bazar life style. Your words took stage and treated the reader to a glimpse of your imagination. Emile.
Dietrich Avatar
September 13, 2015 at 12:10 PM
worse than that. They are VAMPIRES!
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