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We had some neighbors with a sign, “Do Not Disturb.” They’d vanished when a moving van came to the curb. How thrilled we were to learn new folks were moving in. Would they make that old house look neater than a pin? Originality they did not lack! They started painting everything, and everything was black! We feared the value of our property would drop next door to this atrocity. They would not stop! We noticed many other things that seemed to us bizarre. That pair would only paint by night and neither had a car! The sign “Do Not Disturb” remains, so now we think about the fact we’d never seen our former neighbors moving out! Behind their house is where we saw them the first time. We’d heard them digging in the night, but that is not a crime! My spouse peeked out the window. Working fast, and with no sound, that couple started planting bushes on a wide fresh mound. It spooked us, and I pray they didn’t see our curtain lift while spying. They’re at home all day. I think they work night shift! Our house is now for sale; we stay indoors with our two cats. Before each dawn, I swear I hear the sound of bloody bats! Written 9/12/2015

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Date: 9/20/2015 5:34:00 AM
I heard that you've already bought it ... ;) Cleverly done. ((( On another note, can you tell me where to find the contests other than those which appear on the sidebar? I seem to miss most of them )))
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Date: 9/18/2015 9:36:00 AM
Brilliantly creepy and amusing write! I enjoyed the read from your oh so crafty pen! Congratulations on your win, Andie!
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Date: 9/16/2015 12:05:00 AM
My God, Andrea- you're next door to the Addams family! woooooooo..... Great write. Viv x
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Date: 9/15/2015 10:07:00 PM
G'day Andrea... heard of this bizarre behaviour before. It's a ploy used to buy houses cheaper than market price. Bloody scary though - thanks Andrea - Lindsay
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Date: 9/15/2015 10:02:00 PM
Sounds like you are living near the Adams family. Interesting!
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Date: 9/15/2015 6:39:00 PM
What and excellent penned Andrea... I love the flow of your piece, your penned it beautiful and great. Contrats in your win.......A.M.
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Date: 9/15/2015 6:17:00 PM
Congrats on your win Andrea! A wonderful and scary write!
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Date: 9/15/2015 7:44:00 AM
I would be moving too! This was fun.
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Date: 9/14/2015 10:26:00 PM
Funny! Congratulations on your win ! Hugs Eve
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Date: 9/14/2015 9:43:00 PM
Ha!Ha! With neighbors like that, I'd sell my house too! Congrats on your 1st place win, Andrea! Love, Kim
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Date: 9/14/2015 2:47:00 PM
I see a win was achieved with this spooky write of yours Andrea, well done..'
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Date: 9/14/2015 2:09:00 PM
Nice Andrea, loved your take on the contest.
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Date: 9/14/2015 1:23:00 PM
Andrea, Congrats on your, Who Is Your Neighbor win! SKAT
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Date: 9/14/2015 9:50:00 AM
Congrats dear Andrea on your big win!....love, Anu:-)
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Date: 9/14/2015 9:44:00 AM
Oh, wow!! This one had me laughing and completely creeped out all at the same time! Big congrats on your win :)
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Date: 9/14/2015 8:57:00 AM
Andrea, congratulations on your win with this beauty and thanks for visiting my poem, river . . .
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Date: 9/14/2015 8:04:00 AM
We are Your Moon and You are Our Snow! CONGRATULATIONS neighbor!
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Date: 9/14/2015 7:59:00 AM
Andrea, a lovely win! Hugs Balveen
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Date: 9/14/2015 7:44:00 AM
Am glad its a fiction write Andrea think I'd move too lol congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 9/14/2015 7:12:00 AM
Andrea, congratulations on your 1st place win it was well deserved:-) Alexis
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Date: 9/14/2015 3:13:00 AM
Well done, Andrea. Very fun to read. I couldn't wait to get to the next line to see what new mischief your frightful neighbors had gotten into.
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Date: 9/13/2015 6:51:00 PM
I am of a nervous disposition Petal, please refrain from scaring me like this lol. Funny write, nice twist, now hurry up and get out of there, we can't do with you going missing. Take care, Richard
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Date: 9/13/2015 1:15:00 PM
Andrea would you rather live next to Elvis lol. Nice write.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 9/13/2015 5:29:00 PM
YES!! Better than a bloody vampire. hahaha
Date: 9/13/2015 12:05:00 PM
Andrea, those are some bizarre neighbors! The "creepy" kind of neighbors. Good descriptive write with a twist. Ever thought about a who done it type of short story book? If you wrote one you would have the reading going and they won't know what expect:-)Alexis 7
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 9/13/2015 5:29:00 PM
Alexis, the one idea I ever had for a book involved a mystery and a huge twist. But I can't even get started with it. I sit there and cannot even begin it. (Oh to be a Stephen King!)
Date: 9/13/2015 10:48:00 AM
Sounds like you live next to the Munster's, with their bazar life style. Your words took stage and treated the reader to a glimpse of your imagination. Emile.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 9/13/2015 12:10:00 PM
worse than that. They are VAMPIRES!
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