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Who Is She Now Kissing Good Night

Who is she now kissing good night? This lonely night I lie in bed A single thought flows through my head To torment me with tears I weep And break my heart in fractures deep Destroying all I’ve come to love The happy times we whispered of With memories I can’t erase As someone new now takes my place The words I wrote that once did sing Seems now they did not mean a thing For there is always someone new To write it better than you do So as I try to push away This thought it seems is here to stay To ask as I turn off the light Who is she now kissing good night?

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Date: 10/22/2016 7:28:00 AM
I'm telling you, sad bluesy country lyrics, I think you missed your calling Chris, although your poetry makes me want to cry sometimes, it's all stellar.
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Chris Green
Date: 10/24/2016 8:22:00 AM
I'm not a big country fan but I guess you never know. Thanks so much Paloma
Date: 10/21/2016 3:05:00 PM
An excellent post...I cant try to picture this..but I am..and its painful when someone replaces you and takes the one in your life..I can see.this in a song..Awesome.
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Chris Green
Date: 10/21/2016 3:47:00 PM
I knew what you meant Charmaine and you are exactly right about the image, this one hurt to write as the picture was clear in my mind. Thank you for your generous and encouraging comments on my work
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 10/21/2016 3:07:00 PM
I dont want to picture..i meant not cant....Its disturbing to imagine it..and cuts like a knife.
Date: 10/21/2016 2:58:00 PM
ouch!... such a splendid piece and the rhyming lines just float, chris..huggs
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Chris Green
Date: 10/21/2016 3:46:00 PM
Thank you Nette for always leaving such kind words for me.
Date: 10/21/2016 2:16:00 PM
Oh Chris so sad. Well written. You have a gift of writing well.
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Chris Green
Date: 10/21/2016 3:45:00 PM
Thank you so very much Heidi for you wonderful comments.

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