Who Am I 2

Do you 
always feel
like....
Somebody's
watching you
That
 would be me
REALLY
I look 
inside souls
to find 
ugly moles
And 
when I dig in
I'll FIND
 your
 hearts desire
It's 
my little game
thats fun
 in 
my playing
and 
when I find
what's 
really inside
I'll 
unease you
just to 
please you
because
I'm 
FEROCIOUS 
because I 
Just want
to see
how much
you'll blush
I'll 
snow you
just to 
throw you
Because
my intelligence
is rewarding
my eccentricity 
I've got
Betty Davis
 Eyes
That are 
apon you
So don't
be foolish
and let 
weakness slip
I'll be 
right on you
Because 
I've got
Betty Davis
EYES

Kim Carnes song

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DM Babbit

Date: 9/8/2016 8:48:00 PM

LOve "those Bette Davis Eyes"

Holly Bohto
Date: 9/9/2016 2:52:00 AM

Your poem. Its all coming back to me now. You have good instincts. My fellow poet who's writing is inspired by musical desires. Thanks for the visit.