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Who Am I

Who am I in a world uncountless of people and faces that fade with the night Who am I in this game called life will I be remembered if one day I part Who am I before the face of my God will I be saved if I played my part Who am I will I be remembered in the great book of life at the end of my light Who am I as I cant comprehend will I reach my end without having a friend Who am I and what is my reason will I be leaving during the next season

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Date: 1/20/2016 8:25:00 PM
ESME, I really enjoyed this poem thanks for sharing **SKAT**
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Date: 1/30/2014 6:41:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your introspective piece this afternoon Esme :) hope you enjoy your time at the soup...
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Date: 1/20/2014 5:19:00 AM
Very evocative, compelling piece.
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Date: 1/18/2014 8:16:00 AM
Esme, this one cuts very deep. Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 1/17/2014 7:52:00 AM
Esme, . An amazing write.. I LOVE IT! . A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 1/17/2014 7:16:00 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Esme Amanda- I choose your first nice poem and hope you will write many more in the future - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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