Sotto Poet Poet Verse

Who Am I

Written: November 24, 2024, for contest Sponsored by: Constance La France

"Understanding yourself is the onset of all insight." When you wisely witness your worth, you wield wonderful power. When you welcome who you are, you become unbeatable. By Poet
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              In shifting sands,
        I explore the depths of my world
      where whispers linger like ghosts in the night
        and the shattered mirror
  reflects my inner self, puzzling parts of my soul
  revealing my flaws, and the scarce grace of my bile
    with fierce faith and moral courage
  I strive to be a truth model, in my shared life. 

              I grasp splendor
        near me, as I grow and reach light
      yet, anger lingers, quietly looming
        my heart remains mindful
  recognizing ghosts that hover in the shadows
  with positive steps, I plow my path carefully
    word choice, form, frame, and warmth matter
  and each breath I take adds to my inner brightness.
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Form: Crumbling Verse Created by Poetess Constance La France

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Constance La France December 26, 2024 at 6:20 AM Sotto, congratulations on your win in my contest, Who Am I, your poem is wonderfully written, I love it and the quote, Constance

Paula Goldsmith December 12, 2024 at 8:17 AM Congratulations on your win. What a great/wonderful write with a great quote... Have a wonderful day with your win...........

Jay Narain December 7, 2024 at 10:26 AM Nice poem

Valsa George December 2, 2024 at 11:14 PM This self introspection and analysis help us find out our flaws. No one is perfect. The willingness to admit it is the first step towards betterment. In us, there is a constant struggle between good and evil. Despite the shadows that veil our inner light, we can come to bright light if we will. Your journey towards self fulfillment and growth is so beautifully and sincerely delineated. As ever, excellent word choice and powerful thoughts. All the best. dear friend.

Anne-Lise Andresen November 27, 2024 at 6:43 AM - Beautifully and deeply described, Las ... yes, this is you :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs

Victor Buhagiar November 26, 2024 at 8:34 AM This is a worthy attempt for the Constance contest. I feel it is beyond me, especially since my muse is at a low ebb. You did very well. Best for high placement.

Paige Hind November 25, 2024 at 2:21 PM I appreciate this view. Nice work, good word choices - :)

Silent One November 25, 2024 at 11:54 AM Hey Sotto, your poem captures the nuanced journey of self-exploration and personal growth, highlighting the tension between light and dark within the self. Through rich imagery and reflective language, it conveys both the struggles of confronting personal flaws and the hope and determination needed to overcome them. The emphasis on mindfulness, careful expression, and inner brightness offers a powerful message of resilience, showing that despite the shadows we may face, there is always the potential to step toward light and growth.

Jay Narain November 25, 2024 at 9:59 AM Nice poem with all the attributes of a nice poetry.

Ink Empress November 25, 2024 at 3:49 AM Dear sotto, what a deeply moving and heartfelt poem woven with such sublime rhymes and flow of words in such a seamless manner, i love especially “ I chase the light, yet I'm afraid of the weight. Wrath watches calmly adorned with height.” i think many can resonate with that , especially, we seek light but fear still gets in the way of what may be heavy and dark, youv done it well and used also a quote that is very powerful! I think this will do well, best wishes, sending you light