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Who Am I (Acrostic Rhyme)

Who am I has been the question in my life. Here within me is a torture, shared by some. Only my mind knows about my mortal strife. Angrily my mind fights, while I remain numb. My heart is stayed, though merrily carries on. I keep my soul close, segregated from evils con. My personal style or type of poetry acrostic that ends in ryhme

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Date: 4/24/2009 1:47:00 PM
Hello Cecil, this is unique. Acrostic in ryhme. I'll try this someday. Very challenging. I have a featured poem this week. Ernilando
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Date: 3/23/2009 10:19:00 PM
Dear Cecil, Two Forms in one I like it alot I have several POEMS that are two POEMS and more Two Forms Superb Write Please read my "If I Could Again Thank-YOU for YOUR Gracious Comments ALWAYS...HG
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Date: 2/22/2009 8:56:00 AM
Dear Cecil, this title caught my attention. Very thoughtful, and I'm glad you "merrily" carry on despite your worries. Thanks for reading "Blizzard." Barbara is a very loving friend who has been helping me through a tough time. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 2/7/2009 6:49:00 AM
Creative idea! Spiritual, powerful and deeply personal write. Well done and good luck! Love, Shar
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