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Whittling

Souls standing in line As the world pulls out its knife To whittle them down Carve up their lives Does it have an idea An insatiable need As it keeps whittling On them endlessly You do have to wonder What it truly sees As it carves on you And whittles on me Like an old mountain man By a cool mountain stream With Father Time standing by The world keeps on whittling And it'll certainly not tolerate Any back talk from you Just sit still and be quite Like a good piece of wood As the world whistles It whittles away Impressed with itself At the carvings it's made But if it whittles to much And doesn't care for the you that it's made The world tosses you out And lets the dogs play

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Date: 2/14/2017 6:51:00 AM
Creative and thought provoking Mike- I'm thinking whittling individualism!~Che :)
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Date: 2/13/2017 10:08:00 AM
I gave my Dad whittling supplies when he retired. Oh, was he mad! I know this is deeper than whittling, but I have to say I do love wooden whittled figures. Such a good poem.
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Date: 2/13/2017 9:27:00 AM
Good one Mike. Creative you are:)
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Date: 2/13/2017 9:21:00 AM
You have whittled one fine poem!
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