Whittling

The time has finally come, at last,
To start to whittle down the past.
I comb the closets and each drawer
For things I don’t wear anymore.

My tennis shorts for younger thighs;
My Reeboks worn for exercise.
My wide-leg jeans so full and loose
I’d be accused of style abuse.

My denim skirt with matching shirt -
My love for them won’t reassert.
An old wool sweater bound to itch
Now joins the pile I plan to ditch.

I fill a bag to give away
But certain items have to stay
If they don’t make me laugh or cringe.
Oh joy! My t-shirt with the fringe!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Krutsinger Avatar
August 11, 2021 at 10:39 AM
"My denim skirt with matching shirt - My love for them won’t reassert." Too bad; it will probably be the most utmost in style the second you discard it.
Rigoler Avatar
August 10, 2021 at 8:24 AM
Believe it or not, I just scoured y clothes closets for throwaways, not to mention enough unused hangers, if I sold at a dollar a piece would make me solvent for the rest of my life! / Maurice
Leffanta Avatar
August 2, 2021 at 9:57 AM
My mother-in-law did that regularly - to my things, but I enjoyed your well-written poem!
Wolf Avatar
August 1, 2021 at 8:40 PM
A bittersweet process this, ilene. The Chicago Cubs baseball team has been 'whittling down' this week as well. Two of its biggest stars -- Anthony Rizzo and Javy Baez -- have been shipped to the Yankees and Mets, respectively. You'll be hearing from them in New York. Larger than life, those two. :) gw
Mchattie Avatar
August 1, 2021 at 1:19 PM
I also have a lot of excess baggage. Best to lighten one's load before the great hereafter. Wonderful poem. Have a great day my friend.
Allison Avatar
August 1, 2021 at 12:40 PM
We are so alike in so many ways Ilene I too find it so so so hard to let go of clothes and keep them even if they are outdated and a bit worse for wear lol:-) hugs Jan xx
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