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Whittling

The time has finally come, at last, To start to whittle down the past. I comb the closets and each drawer For things I don’t wear anymore. My tennis shorts for younger thighs; My Reeboks worn for exercise. My wide-leg jeans so full and loose I’d be accused of style abuse. My denim skirt with matching shirt - My love for them won’t reassert. An old wool sweater bound to itch Now joins the pile I plan to ditch. I fill a bag to give away But certain items have to stay If they don’t make me laugh or cringe. Oh joy! My t-shirt with the fringe!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




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Date: 8/11/2021 10:39:00 AM
"My denim skirt with matching shirt - My love for them won’t reassert." Too bad; it will probably be the most utmost in style the second you discard it.
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Date: 8/10/2021 8:24:00 AM
Believe it or not, I just scoured y clothes closets for throwaways, not to mention enough unused hangers, if I sold at a dollar a piece would make me solvent for the rest of my life! / Maurice
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Date: 8/2/2021 9:57:00 AM
My mother-in-law did that regularly - to my things, but I enjoyed your well-written poem!
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Date: 8/1/2021 8:40:00 PM
A bittersweet process this, ilene. The Chicago Cubs baseball team has been 'whittling down' this week as well. Two of its biggest stars -- Anthony Rizzo and Javy Baez -- have been shipped to the Yankees and Mets, respectively. You'll be hearing from them in New York. Larger than life, those two. :) gw
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Date: 8/1/2021 1:19:00 PM
I also have a lot of excess baggage. Best to lighten one's load before the great hereafter. Wonderful poem. Have a great day my friend.
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Date: 8/1/2021 12:40:00 PM
We are so alike in so many ways Ilene I too find it so so so hard to let go of clothes and keep them even if they are outdated and a bit worse for wear lol:-) hugs Jan xx
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