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Whittle

He sits silent with the old man; as intrigued watching his gnarled hands whittle away at the pine twig, as he is with tales about Gran, and their life on the wild moorlands. As he now and then takes a swig from a large, chipped, dusty brown jug the man’s rheumy blue-gray eyes glint with mischief; “See that big fat pig?” he says, taking another chug “won him in a wager with Clint.” “bet the fool I could make a tree, whistle the song Yankee Doodle.” “Well, he lost big time and sure paid.” He stopped, put his knife on his knee, winked at the boy and his poodle; then gave him the flute he just made.

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Date: 8/18/2023 5:45:00 AM
Terry, Congratulations on your well-deserved contest win, with this lovely poem.
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Terry Miller
Date: 9/1/2023 3:45:00 AM
Thank you so much, I always appreciate your comments.
Date: 8/16/2023 12:14:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Your "Whittle" is a wonderful write. This is a real art form and not done much anymore. Have a great day............
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Terry Miller
Date: 8/18/2023 2:23:00 AM
Thank you Paula for taking the time to read my poem and your kind comments
Date: 8/15/2023 9:36:00 AM
An amusing, nostalgic write, Terry! I enjoyed reading your poem! Blessings, Kim M
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Terry Miller
Date: 8/18/2023 2:24:00 AM
Thank you Kim

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