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half a heart, my belongings in this cracked old leather case. through greener path on earth I wonder this to disappear. 9/5/2017 seven lines with a syllable pattern 3/4/3/4/3/4/7

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James Inman

Date: 9/27/2017 9:28:00 AM

You never know what's next Eve. A lovely write.

Paul Callus

Date: 9/16/2017 9:23:00 AM

I like your take on this suitcase theme, Eve. We never know what life has in store for us. Congratulations on your fine win. Regards // paul

Subimal Sinha-Roy

Date: 9/12/2017 1:44:00 AM

Congratulations on your placement, Eve.

Winged Warrior

Date: 9/11/2017 6:28:00 PM

Congrats!!! on your wonderful poem and Win Eve...great write...god bless...^WW^

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/11/2017 5:47:00 PM

I love that metaphor of half a heart you used, Eve. Congrats for your win.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/11/2017 12:52:00 PM

Congrats Eve!

Jack Webster

Date: 9/11/2017 12:46:00 PM

Congrstulations Eve!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/11/2017 12:16:00 PM

beautiful reflections which put this work on the winning list, eve... big congrats and thanks for supporting this contest..huggs

Heidi Sands

Date: 9/11/2017 10:27:00 AM

Congratulations Eve :)

Akkina Downing

Date: 9/6/2017 6:42:00 PM

A great piece Eve, and good luck in the contest :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/6/2017 5:38:00 PM

I like how you associated the theme with greener paths that we can have on our minds. Nicely done, Eve.

Alexis Y.

Date: 9/6/2017 9:51:00 AM

Hi Eve, What a good take on the contest theme. The scene you created with a few words stands out. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis

Lim'Rik Flats

Date: 9/6/2017 8:22:00 AM

Wowsa! Don't know what a whitney2 is, but I like this succinct statement! Hugs 'n howdies ~ john

Probir Gupta

Date: 9/6/2017 7:13:00 AM

Nice take on the contest ... Enjoyed it ...

Russell Sivey

Date: 9/6/2017 5:31:00 AM

This is remarkable! I really enjoyed reading your tremendous poem this morning! You have written an amazing write for this contest! I believe Nette will love it! There are a lot of these poem out there, it will be fun to see who wins...I believe your will be up there, if not victorious! Great work my friend!!

Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/6/2017 5:24:00 AM

A lovely interpretation--well executed--well written--good luck, Eve!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/6/2017 2:59:00 AM

- Excellent written, dear Eve :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)