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Whitney 2- Walkaway

half a heart,
my belongings
in this cracked
old leather case.
through greener
path on earth I
wonder this to disappear.


9/5/2017



seven lines with a syllable pattern  3/4/3/4/3/4/7

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James Inman Date: 9/27/2017 9:28:00 AM You never know what's next Eve. A lovely write. Login to Reply

Paul Callus Date: 9/16/2017 9:23:00 AM I like your take on this suitcase theme, Eve. We never know what life has in store for us. Congratulations on your fine win. Regards // paul Login to Reply

Subimal Sinha-Roy Date: 9/12/2017 1:44:00 AM Congratulations on your placement, Eve. Login to Reply

Winged Warrior Date: 9/11/2017 6:28:00 PM Congrats!!! on your wonderful poem and Win Eve...great write...god bless...^WW^ Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 9/11/2017 5:47:00 PM I love that metaphor of half a heart you used, Eve. Congrats for your win. Login to Reply

Vijay Pandit Date: 9/11/2017 12:52:00 PM Congrats Eve! Login to Reply

Jack Webster Date: 9/11/2017 12:46:00 PM Congrstulations Eve! Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 9/11/2017 12:16:00 PM beautiful reflections which put this work on the winning list, eve... big congrats and thanks for supporting this contest..huggs Login to Reply

Heidi Sands Date: 9/11/2017 10:27:00 AM Congratulations Eve :) Login to Reply

Akkina Downing Date: 9/6/2017 6:42:00 PM A great piece Eve, and good luck in the contest :) Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 9/6/2017 5:38:00 PM I like how you associated the theme with greener paths that we can have on our minds. Nicely done, Eve. Login to Reply

Alexis Y. Date: 9/6/2017 9:51:00 AM Hi Eve, What a good take on the contest theme. The scene you created with a few words stands out. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis Login to Reply

Lim'Rik Flats Date: 9/6/2017 8:22:00 AM Wowsa! Don't know what a whitney2 is, but I like this succinct statement! Hugs 'n howdies ~ john Login to Reply

Probir Gupta Date: 9/6/2017 7:13:00 AM Nice take on the contest ... Enjoyed it ... Login to Reply

Russell Sivey Date: 9/6/2017 5:31:00 AM This is remarkable! I really enjoyed reading your tremendous poem this morning! You have written an amazing write for this contest! I believe Nette will love it! There are a lot of these poem out there, it will be fun to see who wins...I believe your will be up there, if not victorious! Great work my friend!! Login to Reply

Vijay Pandit Date: 9/6/2017 5:24:00 AM A lovely interpretation--well executed--well written--good luck, Eve! Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 9/6/2017 2:59:00 AM - Excellent written, dear Eve :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply