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Whitney 2- Stolen

Motionless In greenish field, Unmoved by The blowing wind, The suitcase Has baby food Stolen by the fleeing thieves. September 5, 2017 Whitney 2 contest Sponsor: nette onclaud Syllables: 3,4,3,4,3,4,7 Checked on howmanysyllables.com

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/26/2023 2:14:00 AM

This one has started me to thinking. I wonder if that baby went hungry since they had stolen the food but did not get away with it. Thank you for dropping by my page with congratulations. I appreciate you taking the time to do so. Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/27/2019 8:28:00 PM

Came back here and I remember the contest this one was in!! It's fun to see it again two years later.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/6/2017 5:41:00 PM

I really like the little story you told with your entry, Vijay.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/6/2017 5:56:00 PM

Thank you Andrea!

Akkina Downing

Date: 9/5/2017 6:19:00 PM

Excellent work Vijay and good luck :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/5/2017 7:47:00 PM

Thank you Akkina!

Joseph May

Date: 9/5/2017 5:48:00 PM

Nicely done Vijay...best wishes

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/5/2017 6:00:00 PM

Thanks Joseph!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 9/5/2017 10:30:00 AM

Wow! Good one! GL In contest, Vijay!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/5/2017 10:49:00 AM

Thank you Kim!

Winged Warrior

Date: 9/5/2017 8:06:00 AM

Very nicely done my friend...so far so good...best of luck Vijay...god bless...^WW^

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/5/2017 8:18:00 AM

Thanks for your wonderful feedback WW!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/5/2017 7:16:00 AM

- Excellent poem, Vijay - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/5/2017 8:18:00 AM

Thank you for your lovely feedback--always delighted by your visit Anne-Lise!

Olusegun Arowolo

Date: 9/5/2017 6:39:00 AM

This is wonderful. Great write pal.good luck in the contest.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/5/2017 8:14:00 AM

Thank you for lovely comments!

Russell Sivey

Date: 9/5/2017 6:12:00 AM

This is fabulous my friend, such an amazing message written within this incredible write! You have delighted me by your grandiose skill at writing this difficult form, but you have written a fantastic piece! Great Work!!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/5/2017 6:30:00 AM

Thank you Russell for your lovely feedback--love your comments as always!

Afolabi Muideen

Date: 9/5/2017 6:06:00 AM

wow! what a brilliant poem. Is the flowing air the thief or birds? Thanks for sharing.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/5/2017 6:29:00 AM

Thank you Afolabi for your feedback! I am afraid the thief is long gone.