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Whitney 2- Stolen

Motionless
In greenish field,
Unmoved by
The blowing wind,
The suitcase
Has baby food
Stolen by the fleeing thieves.

September 5, 2017
Whitney 2 contest
Sponsor: nette onclaud
Syllables: 3,4,3,4,3,4,7
Checked on howmanysyllables.com

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Sara Kendrick Date: 1/26/2023 2:14:00 AM This one has started me to thinking. I wonder if that baby went hungry since they had stolen the food but did not get away with it. Thank you for dropping by my page with congratulations. I appreciate you taking the time to do so. Sara Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 9/27/2019 8:28:00 PM Came back here and I remember the contest this one was in!! It's fun to see it again two years later. Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 9/6/2017 5:41:00 PM I really like the little story you told with your entry, Vijay. Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 9/6/2017 5:56:00 PM Thank you Andrea!

Akkina Downing Date: 9/5/2017 6:19:00 PM Excellent work Vijay and good luck :) Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 9/5/2017 7:47:00 PM Thank you Akkina!

Joseph May Date: 9/5/2017 5:48:00 PM Nicely done Vijay...best wishes Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 9/5/2017 6:00:00 PM Thanks Joseph!

Kim Rodrigues Date: 9/5/2017 10:30:00 AM Wow! Good one! GL In contest, Vijay! Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 9/5/2017 10:49:00 AM Thank you Kim!

Winged Warrior Date: 9/5/2017 8:06:00 AM Very nicely done my friend...so far so good...best of luck Vijay...god bless...^WW^ Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 9/5/2017 8:18:00 AM Thanks for your wonderful feedback WW!

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 9/5/2017 7:16:00 AM - Excellent poem, Vijay - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 9/5/2017 8:18:00 AM Thank you for your lovely feedback--always delighted by your visit Anne-Lise!

Olusegun Arowolo Date: 9/5/2017 6:39:00 AM This is wonderful. Great write pal.good luck in the contest. Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 9/5/2017 8:14:00 AM Thank you for lovely comments!

Russell Sivey Date: 9/5/2017 6:12:00 AM This is fabulous my friend, such an amazing message written within this incredible write! You have delighted me by your grandiose skill at writing this difficult form, but you have written a fantastic piece! Great Work!! Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 9/5/2017 6:30:00 AM Thank you Russell for your lovely feedback--love your comments as always!

Afolabi Muideen Date: 9/5/2017 6:06:00 AM wow! what a brilliant poem. Is the flowing air the thief or birds? Thanks for sharing. Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 9/5/2017 6:29:00 AM Thank you Afolabi for your feedback! I am afraid the thief is long gone.