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Forsaken abandoned old vintage luggage suitcase on the field summer sun light

In a field Lies all our hopes Ancient case Filled with pure gold Opens hard With old latches The dreams of a lifetime sits Whitney 2 Contest Written September 5th, 2017 Verse 3/4/3/4/3/4/7 syllable count

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James Inman

Date: 9/27/2017 9:10:00 AM

Reminds me of when I was young and walked into an old abandoned house and found hundreds of letter strewn all over the floor. Memories, lost forever. Nice write.

Eve Roper

Date: 9/11/2017 10:48:00 PM

Back to Congratulate you, Russell Hugs Eve

Winged Warrior

Date: 9/11/2017 6:22:00 PM

Back to Congrats!!! Mr. Russell...good one my friend...god bless and stay well...^WW^

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/11/2017 5:39:00 PM

very nicely done, Russell. Congrats.

Heidi Sands

Date: 9/11/2017 2:29:00 PM

Congratulations Russell :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/11/2017 12:50:00 PM

Congrats Russell!

Jack Webster

Date: 9/11/2017 12:26:00 PM

congratulations!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/11/2017 11:40:00 AM

to borrow your words, russell, " phenomenal!" ... i enjoyed this interpretative work which merited a smashing win in the contest... thanks for your participation... huggs

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 9/6/2017 2:56:00 PM

Oh, I really like your entry Russell. Dreams of a lifetime....Lovely! : )

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/6/2017 2:32:00 AM

- Beautiful, Russell - Luck in the contest - Best wishes and hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper

Date: 9/5/2017 11:12:00 PM

I love the theme and imagery in this poem, Russell, a winner already Hugs Eve ~`*.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/5/2017 9:12:00 PM

Lovely interpretation Russell..good luck!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 9/5/2017 9:06:00 PM

A nice image, Russell!

Winged Warrior

Date: 9/5/2017 7:04:00 PM

Tell him Emma...a beautiful rendition...my Mothers name is Emma...she is very ill at the moment...god bless...^WW^

Russell Sivey

Date: 9/5/2017 6:58:00 PM

Russell couldn't resist doing one of Nette's contests. He loves a good challenge. I decided to post this for him as he used up all his time earlier today. This is one of my favorites of his. Emma :)

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/5/2017 7:16:00 PM

Thanks for posting this for him Emma. Please let him know this is an Excellent poem. A favorite and good luck in the contest ! :)