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Whitney 2--Pure Gold

In a field
Lies all our hopes
Ancient case
Filled with pure gold
Opens hard
With old latches
The dreams of a lifetime sits


Whitney 2 Contest
Written September 5th, 2017
Verse
3/4/3/4/3/4/7 syllable count

Copyright © Russell Sivey | Year Posted 2017

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James Inman Date: 9/27/2017 9:10:00 AM Reminds me of when I was young and walked into an old abandoned house and found hundreds of letter strewn all over the floor. Memories, lost forever. Nice write. Login to Reply

Eve Roper Date: 9/11/2017 10:48:00 PM Back to Congratulate you, Russell Hugs Eve Login to Reply

Winged Warrior Date: 9/11/2017 6:22:00 PM Back to Congrats!!! Mr. Russell...good one my friend...god bless and stay well...^WW^ Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 9/11/2017 5:39:00 PM very nicely done, Russell. Congrats. Login to Reply

Heidi Sands Date: 9/11/2017 2:29:00 PM Congratulations Russell :) Login to Reply

Vijay Pandit Date: 9/11/2017 12:50:00 PM Congrats Russell! Login to Reply

Jack Webster Date: 9/11/2017 12:26:00 PM congratulations! Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 9/11/2017 11:40:00 AM to borrow your words, russell, " phenomenal!" ... i enjoyed this interpretative work which merited a smashing win in the contest... thanks for your participation... huggs Login to Reply

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 9/6/2017 2:56:00 PM Oh, I really like your entry Russell. Dreams of a lifetime....Lovely! : ) Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 9/6/2017 2:32:00 AM - Beautiful, Russell - Luck in the contest - Best wishes and hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply

Eve Roper Date: 9/5/2017 11:12:00 PM I love the theme and imagery in this poem, Russell, a winner already Hugs Eve ~`*. Login to Reply

Vijay Pandit Date: 9/5/2017 9:12:00 PM Lovely interpretation Russell..good luck! Login to Reply

Kim Rodrigues Date: 9/5/2017 9:06:00 PM A nice image, Russell! Login to Reply

Winged Warrior Date: 9/5/2017 7:04:00 PM Tell him Emma...a beautiful rendition...my Mothers name is Emma...she is very ill at the moment...god bless...^WW^ Login to Reply

Russell Sivey Date: 9/5/2017 6:58:00 PM Russell couldn't resist doing one of Nette's contests. He loves a good challenge. I decided to post this for him as he used up all his time earlier today. This is one of my favorites of his. Emma :) Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 9/5/2017 7:16:00 PM Thanks for posting this for him Emma. Please let him know this is an Excellent poem. A favorite and good luck in the contest ! :)